A very well thought out novel with an interesting and unique world.Just by reading the first couple of chapters I can feel the depth of the story and research done by the author.Good Job and best of luck
Great novel hope to get new release fasterrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
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Good story, Dark and interesting to read. The character's design is amazing. MC is by far the best but still has a lot of potential. The writing was great. World background is also great. Overall this is worth the read.
The authors English is very poor and it’s really hard to read chapters. The auntie updates regularly but never responds to comments so far everything is very cliche and the world building is almost non existent it feels like the author is trying to cram a bunch of cliches together and hope fans like it.
Well the mc doesn't have a cheat from the start,the story is well developed.The mc suffered losses sometimes but learns from them.The main character when he didn't have a cheat focused on what he was good in rather than cultivation which he had a weak talent in the beginning and reached a high level in the subjects that he focused on.
We are done with log in novels now the new trend is simulation? Bruhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Today I'm tired so I wont leave as detailed a review as I normally do.
The main problem with this book is that it is painful to read.
It is not emotionally painful to read, and not badly written painful to read.
It is 'why the hëll did THIS happen?' painful to read.
Like I said, I'm tired, don't wanna explain much, so I'll give just one example.
MC is born again in a disgüstingly mütilated body. Fine.
Young master is törturing her. Okay.
Wants her to get räped. Fine.
Lacky comes in, thinks she's too disgüsting. Okay.
Young master gets distracted. MC tries to escape.
The 'loyal' servant of the MC UNEXPECTEDLY shouts when he sees she's escaping, alerting the young master. He'd been watching leisurely btw. And he's loyal, according to the story. I kid you not.
All of this is okay.
Then there's the system. I don't like how it works. At all.
Why 5 stars?
Because it's yuri. And the story can improve as it goes on. I'll probably come back to read it once it has more chapters.
It starts ok but soon this novel becomes chaotic and i don't like those types of novels when mc goes to many places without any logic. Maybe author want to express the time and space attributes but is not doing a very good job.
Let's get the big one out of the way first, the grammar is not the best. You are a new writer and English isn't your first language so you cant be blamed. The story and its characters are interesting and you are good at world-building, keep up the good work :)
Super idol的笑容 都没你的甜
八月正午的阳光 都没你耀眼
热爱105°C的你
滴滴清纯的蒸馏水
你不知道你有多可爱
跌倒后会傻笑著再站起来
你从来都不轻言失败
对梦想的执著一直不曾更改
很安心 当你对我说
不怕有我在 放著让我来
勇敢追自己的梦想
那坚定的模样
Super idol的笑容 都没你的甜
八月正午的阳光 都没你耀眼
热爱105°C的你
滴滴清纯的蒸馏水
在这独一无二 属于我的时代
不怕失败来一场 痛快的热爱
热爱105°C的你
滴滴清纯的蒸馏水
在这独一无二 属于我的时代
莫忘了初心常在 痛快去热爱
热爱105°C的你
滴滴清纯的蒸馏水
喝一口又活力全开
再次回到最佳状态
喝一口哟
哦 你不知道你有多可爱
跌倒后会傻笑著再站起来
你从来都不轻言失败
对梦想的执著一直不曾更改
很安心 当你对我说
不怕有我在 放著让我来
勇敢追自己的梦想
那坚定的模样
Super idol的笑容 都没你的甜
八月正午的阳光 都没你耀眼
热爱105°C的你
滴滴清纯的蒸馏水
在这独一无二 属于我的时代
不怕失败来一场 痛快的热爱
热爱105°C的你
滴滴清纯的蒸馏水
在这独一无二 属于我的时代
莫忘了初心常在 痛快去热爱
热爱105°C的你
滴滴清纯的蒸馏水
喝一口又活力全开
再次回到最佳状态
喝一口又活力全开
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