back to the past for someone at the peak of true gaming so he can restart as a gamer instead ;)
a main character with flaws that other novels don't dare do
fat, mismatched voice, not the peak of the main game of the story,
no true external reasons to return, and an incredible sense of time(is a flaw)
Why is this underrated??? This was actually interestingly good!
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I am enjoying this novel thx to the author for writing it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Good fan fiction i hope you will continue it and not be like other authors
The novel is good from construction to the formulation all I can say is that it's marvelous
Here is a review by the master => After reading this i think you need to improve your grammer and also vocabulary. There is still room for improvement as i see that you are new to this so you can improve a lot. Good luck.
The synopsis is interesting and kind of made me question myself. The writing is superb and I like the pacing. Looking forward for this book~
dude.. i love it .-., hoping to get more chapters, keep up the good work :3, this is my first lewd novel i have read in my entire life, and its truly splending.
I like how the story is progressing so far but I'll suggest you to proofread the chapters once as there are a few grammatical errors. I've pointed out a few though. Anyway, great job! Keep writing!
Great story but some times I get confused about who is talking but other wise I look forward to seeing more updates and more distinct markings for pov changes
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An interesting idea, the imagination of the author is good and the story seems promising so far.