I really enjoyed this book. Even though I hate system and leveling novel but this one is the best keep your good work author.....,............and continue writing ❤️
Honestly, I liked the original story more than this changed one, because the MC there suffered more severely which would give him the "desire" to be much powerful after his regression. But it's just my opinion.
As for my review, the story is awesome, clear as there weren't much errors grammatically and the author didn't change much from what was written in the original so for the readers who read this in the past, we won't be confused.
I'll be waiting for the succeeding chapters and that's the end of my review.
I'm going to shamelessly give myself 5 stars. I hope you stick through the first 5 chapters at least before deciding if you like my book or not. I strive to improve my writing every chapter and I would love honest feedback.
Not your story a**hole!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
What it feel like to steal from someone with real talent????????????????????????????????????????
Its called hemomancer, not bloodmancer you dumdum. Yall add mancer behind any word and consider it done smh my head
1. I got a dig bick
2. You that read wrong
3. You read that wrong too
4. You checked
5. You smiled
7. You are wandering why you are still reading this
8. You saw that mistake, right?
(On 7)
10. But did you see that I skipped 6?
10. You checked
11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9
12. I said "saw you" not you saw
13. I also skipped 2
14. You got tricked
15. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!
Really great book on my top 5 for sure, the only thing I would say I dont love is the pacing of the story, first I thought his cultivation speed was to slow, but then I realized that what was really slow was the time, I mean after 400 chapters or so only 1 year passed and countless events that made an empact on the universe happened, the universe being billions of years If I was the ruler of that universe I would think something terribly wrong is going on, In my humble opinion I think a time skip would make this story feel more ”realistic” and with a better flow.When I read the first 50 chapters or so it felt like years passed but in reality it hasnt even been a week since he got the system.Keep it up author
Bad review simply because the author abandons works in progress to start something new. So disrespectful to his readers.
So far I like it a bit I'm wondering when all this is over with the full power of the rinne sharingan will he travel to other animes or will that be the end
I can't wait see a baby! Remember me when i get pregnant for the first time..what i want what i need is so same like her, ice cream, thx author
The guy above speaks the truth of the World. He whispers the nature of everything to the people of the commons. [img=faceslap][img=coins][img=fp]
This is the definition of a hidden gem.
The characters are realistic and likeable, which is the biggest problem I find with stories similar to this one. There's this plot line about the players who were isekaied into this world knowing that this isn't real life but can quite remember their original life, which is done very well. The world isn't very flushed out, but then again there's only 39 chapters as I'm writing this review.
Overall my only problem is that there isn't enough chapters