This story has a potential in story line, even with the way of the author in writing. I was just amazed for the development of the story! I'll be looking forward to this.
Great job author! Please update often and soon more readers will come and acknowledge your work as a masterpiece.
Story looked good and it was a good read but it is pay to read from chapter 4 so i wont waste my coins Reading more, i normally dont UsE coins until chapter 30 or 40 to get a good feel for the book.didnt even have tge chance fir this book.
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I think you should give more insight into the surroundings. Maybe try changing the locations it will be more appealing. But no doubt it's a strong plotline you have developed. Keep it up I am here to support you beautiful.???
At first it was interesting but as the Novel goes on it just becomes more and more stupid.Mc and all the other people was such a low IQ that it just makes me feel as if it is to forced.I hope there is a Author with the same Novel idea but takes the Novel more serious
honestly I've been searching for something like this one it's just a light hearted adventure type I wish always stays like this and let us enjoy the slow but awesome world building and storytelling it's like your really with them on their adventure it's really good and realistic of a world that they are just having fun honestly you wouldn't even care about being op mc or such thing even though he is but more like having a new life of adventure fantasy and story that doesn't need like big even happening that they have to do save the would it's more like chilling adventures that's just perfect if your looking for something like this and most importantly the details on the stuff they do . the only thing I wish is stays like this and doesn't just go with stereo typical villains like the "spoiler" here like the demons that are building up .and maybe a little more details of follow ups with they're system and leveling sometimes and some skills that get forgotten and that's the only weakness in my opinion to be honest but overall it's really a must read
It's an amazing story and I have been following for a long time. But recently it's been getting reaaaaallly slow paced. I think I will really have to go now and come back later to binge read .
Okay it mostly boils down to two main issues.
1: The writing is awful. I am referring to grammar and spelling.
2: It premiums at 20 chapters. This limits any insights into most all categories in the review so I defualt to low ratings because in the first twenty chalters nothing is given out which makes this story worth buying more chapters except the genre itself. In fact there is the aforementioned poor writing which makes you think twice about EVER giving the story your money.
TL;DR : Dont waste Your time on an early premium story with poor writing unless you have absolutely nothing else to spend fast passes on. 1.8/5
Here to counter people posting 5 star review without reason. this novel is obviously not the pinicle of of perfection.
I love it. Good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good
First five chapters were an exact copy from another novel. I had to check multiple times to see that the novel was in fact published less than three weeks ago due to the super strong deja vu.
From chapters 5 to 35 it was actually quite good.
However, suddenly the author had a brain aneurism and the plot became complete trash. Its gone from interesting to plain cliche.
Also, this novel only has around 150 chapters currently written. Webnovel sure has fallen to be translating these new novels.
Can u please start releasing chapters again