iba todo bien hasta que lo puso con opcion de pago, sinceramente me gustaba como iba yendo la historia pero en el capitulo 23 puso opcion de pago muy temprano
Author here, and this is not a shameless review. Not a proper review either. Basically, this is not a review. This is important information for my current readers, and future readers.
Note: I have decided to remove all chapters, and re-upload them again while reducing the word count from 3k words to 1,5k words minimum. And then to 2k minimum after a hundred chapters or so.
Hopefully, this will only take a day, if not just two days. Thank you.
This deserves a lot of attention, I enjoyed reading this and the great pacing of the story. I was able to get a lot from one chapter and wish to see more! Good work!
This story is so good! I’ve only started and I just want more! Good job!
Novel idea is rather good, an enjoyable read. I'm pretty much a fan and I hope you're able to update more each day. Like the others, some grammatical here and there but it seems like your first work. Good job! I hope your writing skills improve throughout the story!
Bro keep up the good work, I really enjoy reading your novel I really love there's always another layer to be uncovered I hope you keep updating the novel.
Yours sincerely,P4nd4
I enjoyed the storyline of the novel so far and find it promising, but it's difficult for me to provide a thorough evaluation at this point since there are only a few chapters available. Nonetheless, I encourage the author to continue with this work as I am enjoying it so far.
I am at chapter 90 and i am dropping this. It’s because mc parents are dead, his sister is gone. I am not saying that novel is not good but for me it’s just frustrating. Many are commenting about mc being dumb but he actually becomes good with latter chapters but i also think author should not wait for giving mc powerup so late since many readers normally read 10-20 chapters max before dropping if its not good. But overall world building and system power rankings are good. Writing quality is also good. Mc becomes better with time too. Overall novel is good if u r not like me who become frustrated when mc family dies then its for u guys too. Also his one sided love rejects him so I don’t like that either since i m harem lover and I don’t think there will be much harem in the beginning because of pace its going in recent chapters. Anyway keep it up author its a good novel its just not for me or readers like me who hate sad type novels since i am here for fantasy and enjoyment and not for frustrations. Keep it up.
hello am the writer of the novel please hope you like it.
I'm having so much fun reading this novel xD the mc is a total delight, humorous and cute because of how naive he is!Even the women are just so hilarious, I love all their interactions >.
a waste of potential it could've been so much more but it's horrid the concept was nice but a merit system?! this is cliche af and frankly i would prefer the mc was evil heck i'd even be fine with good disciples and bad master
overall rating: not worth my time
This story is a work of art - the characters are witty, well-written and I’m in loveeee. The world development is solid, the pacing is balanced perfectly between large action sequences and then dialogue/ plot progression. This novel is a refreshing take on this genre and I can’t stop thinking about it!!