I Became a Pawn Shop Owner

Writing quality is poor, there are a lot of gramatical errors which make it so the reader has to read things multiple times to know what is going on, the overal story idea and story progression is not bad though. If the author could fix their writing of the english language then it would get a much higher rating.

all I can say is, good concept but lackluster writing. The 'owner of a magical shop' troupe is interesting but the phrasing of the words and grammar pulls one out of the story
I really like the concept so if you want me to edit some chaps for free hit me up on discord: Daoist RedSnow#2180

Another shop owner type of system novel! I'll give 5 stars on the concept itself and full marks for encouraging the author to not drop it even though some errors have been made.

This one is rough, the grammar issues are bad enough to ruin the story. I find it hard to even follow the story developement when I'm trying to figure out what the author is even trying to say.

Okay it mostly boils down to two main issues.
1: The writing is awful. I am referring to grammar and spelling.
2: It premiums at 20 chapters. This limits any insights into most all categories in the review so I defualt to low ratings because in the first twenty chalters nothing is given out which makes this story worth buying more chapters except the genre itself. In fact there is the aforementioned poor writing which makes you think twice about EVER giving the story your money.

TL;DR : Dont waste Your time on an early premium story with poor writing unless you have absolutely nothing else to spend fast passes on. 1.8/5

Fix your early chapters bro, couldn't handle it due to bad english, typos, and grammar problems besides it might help boost your novel to some extent.