Naise Story. You can add many conflict and many solution. Its very good for me as a newbie. I everything make a some novel... But not good yet Like your exactly. I m really thanks for you because it is give some inspiration to make novel be a good novel.
Ничего не понятно, нудно и скучно. Мир сложный, и его не раскрывают. Персонаж глупый. Второстепенные персонажи бесят...
Положительных моментов я тут вообще толком не разглядел, за что и низкая оценка.
Wonderfully exciting! I cant wait to read more! Mr Ward has a unique storytelking ability that keeps you reading and waiting for the next chapter.
this review is done out of spite... but naming his hellhound "fat tiger" ruined this story and my immersion, I didn't even find it funny. i wish the translator just gave us its name in chinese instead of a literal translation, can't even continue reading...so much potential, such a good story, somehow ruined by a NAME.
this is a dreat novel with a new and refreshing idea that till now i think is implemented beautifully.so i hope to see this through and for it to be a long term project.so keep at it author.
Just started reading and already hooked! Makes me feel connected to it and makes me want to dive deeper into the story! I really like it and can't wait till more chapters. Keep it up!
There only 5 or 6 chapters of this novel so far and it seems as though its been a year aince update i.e. the low score What has been written i truly enjoyed however why introduce a movel with so few chapters and no updates at all☹️☹️
This novel is somewhat similar to Anchestor Above. The purpose of the system is to dominate the world, and It’s a bit disappointing to me.I don’t mind mc rulling a place and developed it into the stongest place but to rulling the world with messy government is... no to me.I’ll give this novel 3/5
You can immediately tell that this is one of those stories that will keep you engaged until the end. I was really surprised at the quality for web novels but this one changed my mind and ill look into other stories now as well.