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Not recomend for ******** action-game like readers. No OP MC. The first chatpers are storybuilding arc thats why its lack action scenes. Differrent profession between NPC and Players is quite interesting idea (will take long chapters to explain all system anyways).
I like everything about it. I haven't seen anything wrong with it personally. Its consistent, good grammar, decent personality (if not a little greedy), and its decently realistic especially since it's in a game. Genuinely a good read.
good mannn.....like it but you should fast forward to 2000 s because now there is no special effects or good movies to do..... or marvel.....or beauties like scarlett or others....kkkk
World background is something refreshing. I think Netflix should take a stop by here and give this a read. it has amazing content I think people would like to watch after they read.
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Full story is on MTL. 190 chapters. It’s a good story, but many parts are just a bit too rushed. And like most light novels I’ve read, the ending is incredibly rushed.
The story is very intriguing and has a good writing style. The story is interesting enough to keep you wanting to read more. Good job Author!
it is an interesting story... the plot is different from a normal story.... the vocab is great ... thr characters too... keep up the good work!
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The author did an excellent job in describing the scenes and all. The story title is quite hooking. Keep on writing and I think you will improve quite fast as your story has the potential and a really good plot.
Great job author!!!
Writer fails to make any difference it's just stupid repeating the same process without having any major change to the story and the fact the system is ****ty
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Wonderful writing. Very well put together. I love the characters and how the story builds around them. I can tell you put some good thought into your writing.. Well done my friend.