Has some standard stuff in it's world building and some cliché. I like how a lot of the leveling and ranking works similar to reincarnation of the strongest sword god. The spelling and grammar messed up a few times but it got a bit better in later chapters. The way skills and some items worked weren't really fleshed out in the beginning but it has gotten better and things seem to have more explanations which is good. Overall pretty good novel so far.
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I’m sorry if it’s not but this just seems like a rip of of After Transformation, Mine and Her Wild Fantasy? Like the premise tho so I’ve rated it pretty high just the world and characters seem a bit off to me
i think this is the only bad thing about this novel is how quick they are too kill i understand some people need to be killed but he didn't show and emotion in saying he was gonna kill her it sounded like he was talking about a bug this reminds of another novel where the villain goes into another world with the mc but he see's everyone as npc's and kills them all and it seems like the dont care about anyone but their crushes which from what i see they arent going to end up with them they ignore every girl but the one's they like which is kinda annoying
Quite a good novel but i dropped it at that mercenary chapter mc is an naive idiot that thinks that letting those people go who have come to kill him is the best thing to do if you can tolerate this type of mc then it'll be a good read for you.
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story is too long winded. that is my main problem with it. at some point you pay for 10 or 20 chapters and maybe a day or two pass in the timeline that is too slow paced especially if you expect me to pay for each chapter.he build a nice house for himself, thats fine, but was it nessecary to spend 7 chapter describing it? and then another 2 for his sisters POV+ 1 cahpter moving in? 10 chapters, 60-70 coins, for what?the he starts getting involved in music and now you can enjoy a dedicated chapter at least for each instrument he masters(he has grandmaster lvl skill for that so he only needs to practice a little to improve drastically) this was not nessecary just tell us he practiced those instruments and move on etc. etc.8 chapters on the first day of interviews for his anime studio(chapter 120-128), most of these employees will be forever name and faceless why spent so much time on that? then there is the 2nd 3rd and 4th phase of interviews so buckle up. the studio opens in chapter 225 by the way. to be fair this is not all just interview they are also starting to produce their first anime, there are a lot of slice of lif parts which are fine and he is producing an album where almost everything is micromanaged which too is too long winded.its still a good story though. i would give it 4 stars if it wasn't for the unnessecary length.
A lot of nationalism and racism apathetic mc one dimensional side characters it isn't worth reading.
I must say it's good, a very nice story and I'll be looking forward to how it develops further.
Now to reach the 140 words needed.
All my devotion betrayed
I am no longer afraid
I was too blinded to see
How much you've stolen from me
You want to know why
I feel so horrified
I let my innocence die
You want to know why
I can't be pacified
You made me bury something
I won't be sleeping tonight
I only wanted a blessing made
Now I've been labeled a renegade
It seems so clear now what I must do
You're no immortal, I won't let them
Deify you
They view you as the new messiah
Deify you
Renew belief in some demented man
You want to know why
It seems the passion has died
We've all been living this lie
You want to know why my
Will's been fortified
You made me hunger again
Good luck sleeping tonight
I only wanted a blessing made
Now I've been labeled a renegade
It seems so clear now what I must do
You're no immortal, I won't let them
Deify you
They view you as the new messiah
Deify you
Renew belief in some demented man
All my devotion betrayed
I am no longer afraid
All my devotion betrayed
I am no longer afraid
I was too blinded to see
How much you've stolen from me
I was too blinded to see
All my devotion betrayed
I am no longer afraid
I was too blinded to see
How much you've stolen from me
I only wanted a blessing made
Now I've been labeled a renegade
It seems so clear now what I must do
You're no immortal, I won't let them
Deify you
They view you as the new messiah
Deify you
Renew belief in some demented man
I only wanted a blessing made
Now I've been labeled a renegade
It seems so clear now what I must do
You're no immortal, I won't let them
Deify you
They view you as the new messiah
Deify you
Renew belief in some demented man
I was too blinded to see
How much you've stolen from me
The song has nothing to do with the story
Needs a tonne of work, props to the author and I wish him/her the best of luck.
I must say, the first chapter was imho, freaking terrible. It was all over the place, nonsensical mish mash of all the best stuff someone could think of for a modern day mc slapped together into an abomination called Michael.
I seriously could not bring myself to read another chapter, I dont say this to discourage the author, it's hard to write! I understand that it isn't easy. This book needs some serious editing and the author needs to just sit and relax a bit, your mc never has to be the everything guy! The best things about characters in novels arent their perfections but their imperfections! All their flaws make them come alive and make your readers empathise with them through their journey! The best thing you can do for your audience is to make them always think about the qualities of our creations that resonate with them! Connecting with them makes your story stand out from the rest of the monotonous garbage that litters this app.
You should (If you haven't already but suggesting by the hazardous writing that feels like its come straight from your head to being published) brain storm ideas, the direction you want to go, important antagonists and/or ideas for ones to come! Major turning points in your story that will affect your mc in major ways! These sort of plot points are needed so you can have some sort of direction to love in otherwise it becomes a mess, something that becomes harder to fix the longer you go. Never start the fillings before you've conquered your outline and outlook of where you want your story to go!
You may not read this but I seriously hope this helps if you do kind regards
When I read this the first thing I thought is, wow it's pretty similiar to the devil's cage with some difference. Then I found out they were written by the same author