Malaza_Keny
A rough start, where MC is a total idiot and the entire scenario/plotline is somewhat really toying around with him.
It is recommended not for those who are easily annoyed of a slow progressing story that enduces so much hate on the first half. If you manage to get through the first half of the entire novel (not the current translated ones but raws as it is complete) then I clap my hand to you as you have persevered the enraging journey across mount tai.
This novel is great! It’s not an apocalyptic system novel that’ll put you to sleep haha..updates are reallyyyy slow so just spam the author
The story line is good i hope it continue to update without delay and give the main character some confidence to woe more girls as for other things make more and better sex sence discripstion all in all it s good
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hmm well this is fairly new story and there's not much juice in it but anyways heres what i think so far.
1.The MC is original like he isnt the kind of guy thats too ideal or what most MC's usually are too matured for their age and all.
2.And I personally like the meme references the author incorporates smoothly and subtly its hilarious and a new type of comedy i guess
And please release ore chapters this story has great potential.
P.S.- first review (SMUG FACE)
I like it, even if it's only at the prologue. Although the world background needs more editing and the character design is lacking a little bit. Overall, everything's great!
Awesome novel.
There are very few novel, which attracts my attention in this genre.
It was hilarious and It was rate for me to get so much into it.
Yeah, I think has a bit of problem with his tenses and singular and plural words.
But I think it would improve overtime.
Just don't drop it
Reading the reviews, I became extremely curious. A feel good novel with nice characters? Was this even a Chinese novel!? Reading it, I have to say, everyone is correct! This is not your typical Chinese novel. Instead of having arrogant young masters, people bullying the lesser off protagonist, or face slapping, it is instead a sweet and fluffy novel where the main character is optimistic and hard working, and is helped by the side characters, who are all friendly and supportive! It's a breath of fresh air and very enjoyable. I hope that this will quickly be chosen to enter the voting pool, it's definitely worth continuing to read as long as it continues down this path!
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Lost a lot of brain cells reading this, the world building is prettg nice, but after chap 21 I couldnt keep going with the other aspects.If you feel like it and has a lot of time to waste, you can read this, if not, well... You SHOULD get another one to invest your valuable time.
the writing quality and the world background are exceptional for this book. The MC comes across as a hopeless retard and personally for me it just doesn't make sense. He has experience s of two lives and yet for some reason he acts like a child. He has experienced brutality and severe loss and yet it had zero impact on his personality or his outlook. He is just unable to understand the severity of the situation and nor is he too op. Only thing the MC has going for him with his limited intellectual capability is Plot Armour.
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This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes in this ****. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna take a **** much. If this novel got some drive, thank God its still alive.
