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I absolutely like your idea of making the MC as a sword. Your way of explanation and storytelling is indeed easy for me to understand it. The grammar in the earlier chapters has some problems, but it seems that the later chapters has good grammar.
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Nice book. It needs support ........................................................................ ...................... .. . ... ..........
I've read 10 chapters so far and I'm already hooked. Writing quality is really good. I was able to imagine the scenes vividly. The plot itself induces a lot of possibilities which makes it unpredictable (in a good way). Characters are distinct and I didn't have any trouble figuring who's who during the conversations. The pace is smooth as well.
Overall, a highly recommended book!
Please author if there is a scene in this book where he gains a human or humanish form have him do something with music I honestly don't care what but keep his dream even in a new form and new world, could be great motivation.
As I continue to read this book it keeps solidifying itself into my favorite books on Webnovel. There is a sort of uniqueness to this novel that I like and I cant wait to see where we go from here.
The story had a lot of potential but unfortunately its been ruined. The author tried making the conversations smart, sassy, funny and mature but he totally overdid it. Many conversations are stretched out for no reason as well.
most important is the desperate need for a EDITOR !!!! bit of interesting story. I'm about 120chps in I would love to see this book through to its end .the bad Grammer and sentence structures make it hard to read
This is a great novel that shows a lot of promise. Hopefully the authors don’t screw it up later on. Hopefully this one doesn’t get dropped and I’m actually looking forward to where this I heading.
An ok novel for 400 chapters, but after is just trash, mc make stupid choices, boring events, author with limited imagination or limited age. Blabla Blabla Blabla Blabla Blabla Blabla Blabla Blabla Blabla Blabla.
Why qi, why, bring somebody who doesn't eve know the glossary of the novel and just doesn't even put the effort it deserves, just why?
Ex:old:Heaven-killing Axe
New: Scorpio axe
WHAT THE HELL IS SIMIlAR BETWEEN THESE TWO WORDS OTHE THAN "AXE"
another example is old " peerles master pro" and new ,friggin "guru".
Please dont ruin this with a ****ty translation pls
This novel deserves more effort