Finally..they improved their Quality
Best Novel recent Months of trial.
Our MC is Man of culture..... Really into Furry.
From plot to character development to World development is Quite Good.
Translation Quality could be more better.
I will Totally Recommend this.
Story is interesting
This Novel have many flaw but overall Good Novel.
To Properly analyse this Novel 60 Chapter needed. 40 chapter doesn't do Justice
The system the mc has isn't what I was expecting, bringing down my expectations to rock bottom. The title might as well be changed to 'Immortal Hero: I can see the Answers.'
That's basically what happens when the system is used. MC uses it, gets the success rate and should have called it a day. But wait a minute, there's more! The next system blurb states what the MC needs to do to get that percentage to 100%, reducing the MC to your average MC depending mostly on the whims of the system, and not using their own skills and intelligence.
Rt to the Moon by the way I don't have to go out of town for the weekend and I will be there at the same time I don't have ah phone again and I will be Don't Force Base
I haven't started reading so ignore me..................................................and yes I'm mainly here for the exp I'll read it though..................
So far, everything has been good. There is no problems that I will nitpick on, the time is not quite ripe yet for a review since there has been only 6 chapters so far, but since the author has requested for it, I have shown up, I am not able to give a definite score because of the low amount of chapters to review but I would definitely keep this in my Library as long as it doesn't drop in performance.
This is my first novel and am planning on more than 15 chapters a day.
I hope you guys enjoy the story and give a good review on my story.
Thanks for reading.
A mind bending thriller that has the makings of a classic. Our MC awakens upon a pillar and that is where our horrific tale begins. However nothing is never as it seems and only worsens. A recommended must read.
I know the author on a personal level. So I might be a little biased. But honestly, this is a good story.
I think the details could be improved and perhaps that would make this a gem. But id still read this. not because the author is holding a gun to my head( I assure you, he isn't) but because I like this story
Extremely - EXTREMELY - difficult to read! It took immense effort just to decipher the sentences. I had hoped the story would improve over time, but it unfortunately didn't. The first chapter was hideous, the second showed improvement, but then after the third, quality dipped to all-time-low again.
Let's forget about writing quality for a moment and address the elephant in the room: story development and character design. The protagonist so far has 0 (yes zero!) personality. We don't know anything about him apart from the one tiny little detail that he's a transmigrator from our Earth. You would think after this abysmal display of character design things can't possibly get any worse! But no! Somehow it does.
The protagonist in a display of absolute genius decides to reform the government to not only have a constitution, but a constitution which directly limits the Emperor's (the MCs) power. Transforming the absolute monarchy into, you guessed it, a constitutional monarchy. This author is clearly either completely ignorant about historical social evolution, or worse...a liberal snowflake.
nice plot but author can't explain the story. can't build the background. Main character become side character due to lack of screentime in story. Also author jumps from one situation to other(story inside story) which is anything but annoying. let's forget about grammar here.
Will be honest about it. There are many grammatical mistakes which you need to correct. The plot is interesting and and so are the characters. I've ten chapters so far and I liked it. Keep updating and make us smile! Fighting Author!
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