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Pretty good so far. The main character could definitely be considered evil, but the idea is pretty unique and I would definitely wish to see this novel continued. Maybe he will reform the Dragon Race into a more communal race rather than just a group of individuals. Can’t wait for more. THX.
I had read a few funeral system type novel before, but from what I read here, it seems different. What I read before is all "I'm gonna help Bury you, then you will explode treasure chest or attribute.".
While if this synopsis is not misleading or bragging, then it's the type where it will help you set up an epic death.. Hurm...
Hey webnovel when are you translating the new novel from the author of the legendary mechanic. Hey webnovel when are you translating the new novel from the author of the legendary mechanic.
Sign webnovel can you pick better novels so they have a chance to shine instead of the millionth near similar idea done again? Another beast taming with the mc able to buff them up yawn.
MC forgets to have a system after chapter 40-50.
This suffices to drop the novel, I Ve ready till chapter 90 and its not worth.
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I don't have any ps at the moment, so this is the other best thing I can do to support the author. For me, so far, so good! I like the story structure and how he details the scenes, the author is experienced and has a few minor grammatical errors, but don't ever hold that against anyone. The story is good, and the cover is beautiful! Other than that good read, give it a try!
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This is actually an amazing story. I hope this gets picked. This is the type and quality of stories I want to see. It’s Been awhile since Webnovel and given us something like this.
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Another VR game novel.
Translation (or writing, idk, lazy to check) is good.
Other than that it’s just generic story about VR game.
Boring. Nothin new. Or maybe just because I read many novels in this genre? Idk
MC is handsome. Beautiful eyebrows, beautiful eyes, beautiful voice etc, you know the usual. Girls also beautiful.
Equipment, stat, somehow rare drop, rare boss, rare quest although every other player is 2 months ahead of MC.
Everything MC did are shocking feats. Enemies left and right, face slapping here and there.
This is just a novel with basic templates for VR game genre. Nothing new.
The story is about a reincarnated boy from earth in a futuristic world with beast taming. Mc finds a system that is like a hyperbolic time chamber but it is another world.
The story seems to be good but the characters seem to be 1 dimensional but the most off putting thing is the grammar. The grammar is so bad that it seems the author doesn't know MC's main gender.
Author if you have seen this please fix Mc's gender.