Great book. The story is really interesting and actually makes sense. The mc actually has a brain and plans stuff ahead. The side characters are also well fleshed out, to the point that some of them feel like the mc. The world building is also really good and the update stability is consistent with 1 chapter a day.
It got me hooked! Imagine, thinking that you got into an eerie place then turns out you're just dreaming.
I love how you do your character design. It shows well on how your MC behaves. The description was pretty neat too. I enjoyed it. Good work
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First this story has already 100 plus chapters which is a great way for binge reading. The story plot is interesting. The narratives are easy to read and can be perceived well by the readers. The world background is written well.
Overall, this book is a great read!
Great work author!
The first couple chapters introduce too many named characters that seem to not be relevant till a fair bit later. Which makes it very hard to get a grasp on what is happening and sacrifices the chance to get more detail on a smaller set of characters. I immediately was less invested in any one of them. Especially because this happened right off the bat.
From the synopsis I was expecting the story to be starting near the end of the synopsis with a bit of extra information. The current state however, is that the at last chapter currently available (ch47) the progression is halfway through the 2nd sentence of the synopsis. Which means so far chapters only exist for what you already know will happen if you read that. This makes it a boring read so far, in my eyes, and should have been left as a brief prologue.
I do feel this has potential as the ideas seem to be there and the characters and worldbuilding seem to have been thought about, but its currently not there.
I saw you had a similar review so I tried to give explanations as to why I think this way.
This has turned out surprisingly to be a quite a good book. A lot of times crafting books get a bit boring, but the author manages to keep you interested with battles, world descriptions and more .
World development is fascinating and the characters around MC are interesting as well. The only wish is for the author to do more updates!
I am soooo annoyed by this novel and sad for the Mc, honestly author tell me truth ....
are you a sadist or something ? I can't even
Pretty solid book realatively interesting and definitely worth while to read try it at the very least even if it isnt your normal type of book
i tried reading but could not get past the first 10 chapters. Story itself is good, but bad English ruins experience. I could barely get into the story, every other paragraph, i had to re-read a sentence and correct it in my mind to make sense of it. Tenses are all over the places, sentence structures feel unnatural and painful to read.
First and foremost, I strongly recommend this book! (As of writing, I am only chapter 26 in, but it seems the book has started very recently). Pro's: 1. World building: The author thus far has built the world in a way I consider refreshing compared to other novels I have read. Instead of information dumping everything from the get go, we are "shown" rather than "told". From reading I am able to pick up the state of their dystopian society based upon several interactions early on in the book. (the homeless man beaten, the mutated animals, the
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personally, l like the book. it has, good characters, realism, character building, a good author, and also is quite satisfying. like when bad people get what's coming. that being death of course. so overall, 8/10 would recommend.