First of all, please fix the lump of text meshed together in some chapters that make the story really hard to read. Other than this formatting issue, the translation is top quality.
FYI, don't get scared away by the formatting mess in the first chapter. I actually almost dropped the novel because of that. Persist and you'll be rewarded.
I have been looking for a horror novel with good story telling, like My House of Horrors and Dreadful Radio Game. (Plague Doctor is just too confusing for me.)
Midnight Bookstore definitely fits the bills. It's made up of many exceptionally good ghost stories.
Pros:
- A smart MC
- A funny side kick friend
- An interesting walking female corpse
- A creepy Envoy of Hell kid
- No homophobic undertone
- So many curve balls and plot twists that you don't see coming (it really makes you doubt every character that appears)
- Many of the ghost tales are in the gray area (there's no black and white, it's hard to tell who's right or wrong)
Cons:
- Will this novel ever get picked up from the trial read?!
- How long do I have to wait?!
- And oh yeah, please fix the formatting issue.
Other thoughts:
- MC's store is not a Midnight bookstore, more like a late night bookstore since it doesn't only open at midnight (in fact, it even opens during daytime)
- MC is always thinking about sleeping with his wife (but not in a perverted way-ish?). But thanks to his side kick friend though, now he has a psychological issue he got to overcome before he can do that
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An above average novel. Has similarities to Fantasy Simulator and World's Best Martial Artist. If you enjoyed those two you might like this.
Not too many negative things to say. This story doesn't spice up the cultivation genre or correct many of the cliches and errors that plague it. Chu Yunfan has a chubby best friend, obtains crazy OP inheritance, etc. I could go on but you get the point.
Still, you should give this story a chance. Despite the cliches this novel flows well. No crazy nationalism or rape that I read yet so that's a bonus.
I was very happy with the amount of new novels but was disappointed with the amount of chapters
It is amazing how the writer was able to combine mystery, the supernatural and humanity. Awesome!!!!!!!!! It is a good read and I look forward to more from the author.
this author=mc is... hard to find worse! save yourself the time!
this author=mc is... hard to find worse! save yourself the time!
this author=mc is... hard to find worse! save yourself the time!
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Awesome book so far. I will be disappointed if it isn’t translated.
More chapters please I love the story so far.Also can you make the mc a little bit more op? He needs to open more bags and become a god between next chapters.Work hard on this and make new chapters please.
This novel is such garbage I had to give it another review since Qidian doesnt let us rate below 2/10.
I’ve kept reading the MTL and just wow has ot gotten even worse. It’s become the shit where people try to kill the MC and the MC is like “virtue of life” yada yada and lets them go. What will happen because of this? Obviously more enemies will come.
There is just stupid trial after stupid trial because everyone looks down on the MC and the MC wants to prove himself to face slap everyone just like China wants to do in its dreams.
Pure garbage. I can’t think of a worse novel I’ve read in the past ten months. And I’ve read a lot of shit-tier novels on here.
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