Whats the MC like? Is he cold, indifferent, evil or is he lame, boring and a simp? If its not the first half I’m out
The writing quality is decent, the author does this EX: “Nevare get over here!” Anne runs over there.” It’s very annoying. The MCs emotions are training and being more humane than other orcs. Zero character development 41 chapters in. Overall mid novel
The more the story progresses the more boring it becomes.Till now I do not understand what is the value of the system. It is like some bounty on his head and for months he is not progressing in cultivation. Man, this is supposed to be a system novel.
bro please improve on grammar and dont lie in the synopsis and also stop writing cringe...........................................................................................
Author, don't put a few exclamation marks. (Yes!! Yeah!! Oh okay!!) It's just stupid. And I don't understand why you added punishments to the system, they don't even motivate, the main character already has enough motivation. The main character can't even refuse... He is, in fact, just a weak-willed slave of the system.
What a great story!!!!. I really like this story.Leo is
a calm cunning and shrewd and amazing person.I like him very much.I think he was an older and experienced man in his first life.It will help him his current time.By the way You are a talented writer.I am looking forward to read your story.I am glad you didn't give this up.Good luck Thanks.
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Does this book have romance or harem? Don't trust the author after reading a bit into abyssal lord and the romance and interactions between mc and Sofia ruining an already shaky novel. If there is gonna be romance at least don't waste ppl's time finding out and add the tag in.
Don’t get me wrong the novel is good, but there’s a lot of flaws to it especially with the character build up and I’m talking about level wise after 400 chapters, He is still in third order even though many around him is already ranked up. I mean the mere fact that he almost died in the last 50 chapters should, tell you how it is. I mean he has so much experience points saved up that he can jump all the way to the fifth peak order but the author use the excuse of he needs to build his foundation but it’s already been over 100 chapters or even more 300Now let’s talk about the writing quality, to be honest, many of you might not like it in the beginning, but it does get better, but then after 350 chapters in he changes the writing completely. As in if you’re not used to Archaic way of writing, which is pretty much old English Shakespeare, etc then you’re gonna have a pretty much a hard time reading the storyNow let’s go to the kingdom building in my personal opinion I enjoyed it. I mean the mere fact that he was able to build his empire from scratch after many trials, and tribulations is dope. Now, if you were here for the romance that I can say to you that so far, it’s been great in my opinion, at least from my perspective personally, the relationship does not look like it’s forced and it takes over hundreds of chapters for things to develop and etc. Plus it’s a harem, so plus for many of you.Overall I gave the story a 3.6 don’t get me wrong. The story is good in the beginning going up to around 300 but I feel like everything just started going downhill and the story became repetitive. One thing you will tend to notice a lot is every time the author explains a certain character. He will repeat the same thing, 40 to 50 to 60 chapters later and you’ll just sit there and ask yourself why is he writing this because we’ve already covered it. Trust me if you pay attention to details, you will notice it.I do hope you guys read the story and form your own opinion but this is my opinion and I’m gonna drop the story. Of course I will come back to see how it goes but after reading 400+ chapters. I just can’t take it anymore. I feel like it has went downhill instead. To the author, I don’t know if you’re gonna read this or not but I wish you all the best and hope blessings go your way.
Story is great.Translation after chapter 40 S*CKS.The translation ruined it all. Use Go*ogle Translate or ChatG*T to get a better translation or to edit the chapters
It's a good storyline. Got me hooked from the synopsis. Totally love it.