In my opinion, this is one of the best novels I wrote until now. I cannot vouch that everyone will like it but I'm pretty sure that the majority of readers will learn to love this books, the characters and the authors(definitely no bragging)
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Dropped chapter 22
It is to fast paced and Unrealistic causes me to lose interest
If it was another planet and mc was 8 it be more believable
By chapter 22 not clear how much time past but mc has already made 1 million yuan and paid of debt
Became famous
And has mastered/learnt half dozen recipes
Yet still wishes to expand options for customers when he works alone
My goodness! Great work, thor! The story concept just quite antimainstream and interesting. Really anticipate the next chapter of this story. Keep up on a good work!
Writing improves as the story progresses(grammar, vocab, etc.). A great start of the protagonist's adventure to revenge.
Writer have a writing style of first person perspective, solely focusing on the main character and events happening around him including his thoughts and thinking processes.
Overall, a great story.
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This is a copy of another novel with the same name. Didn’t even bother to change the cover. I will now 1 star all of your stolen novels. Imagine stealing IP. You don”t even translate them. You just steal them from other sites.
The plot so far (30 chapters in) : a guy is reincarnated as a prince in a cultivation world anD, because of a fortune-teller's warning that he is an ill-omened curse on the royal family, is locked up in a cold palace for 15 years and is forbidden to cultivate. In his teens he awakens a sign in system and starts cultivating. At the same time the nation is going through wars and princes are dying off, and the king blames the MC because of the fortune telling.
I'm not a fan of this version of the story (there are at least two other recent sign in novels that have the same bones of the plot), because it drags. Entire chapters are spent on the MC navel gazing about cultivation, then entire more chapters are spent with the MC offscreen while side characters talk on and on. Despite the tedious focus on talking about cultivating and cultivation levels, the power levels aren't clear to me, and I'm not interested to learn more. This novel just seems phoned in, and not worth the effort of reading.
Raw please?
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I mean, this is the highest review I've given this site so yeah.
I really like this story so far, the pacing is rather slow, but it really helps flesh out the world. There are so many stories where stuff is mentioned but never ever expanded upon, but here it all has a nice flow where each thing comes in phases and is never left in the dirt as the plot progresses. The characters are incredibly well written and you seem super connected with the readers and the stuff that you bring in is very realistic for this day and age, like the streaming system.
Personally, for improvements I'd like, I'll be honest, I'm a sucker for love interests, so I'd like to see some of that. Another small complaint is the lore of the game. MC was introduced as a lore hunter, yet for most of the story we just have hunting, and grinding and then some plot and back to hunting. Don't get it twisted, as I really enjoy the fights, they feel well thought out, but they stretch on a bit too much sometimes. I'd like to see more interactions between him and the other characters, unless they aren't directly affecting the plot you had in mind, so do whatever. The conversations he has with people about the game or what he thinks of it always get cut short. He talks with Donovan in the car sometimes but there's no dialogue about what he thought about it, we just get a one liner before he's back to doing his stuff.
Overall, the story's great. I really enjoy it and I hope to see it hitting the WebNovel charts soon! Thanks for the novel!
Hi, I just want to say that I love your story. this is very very interesting. I love how you create scenes that makes it feel like real. To be honest, I'm not a BL fan but I'm not also a basher of BL stories or anything. Just like what I said, I do believe in the uniqueness of every story. This story of yours is so good and I can say that this deserve a lot of support from the readers out there! You're a great Author! keep safe!
Read till chapter 5 till now, and I think the novel's pretty cool. The description of everything is good too however I would suggest to re-edit the initial chapters once again as there are a few grammatical mistakes. I know stats are important, but long complicated terms can make it slightly boring so I would suggest to reduce it if possible. Since there are some action scenes too, I feel the emotions could've been described better, rest everything is perfect and I wish you best of luck author.
the idea behind the story is okay. The way the story is told and presented to the reader is one of the worst I have seen in a long while. Plot armor so thick that it hides world building full of holes and inconsistencies, don't worry it maybe takes a couple of chapters to fully see how thick the plot armor is but once you do the broken world building is very obvious. The opponents are idiots and the main character is not much smarter. Everything that was put in to make the main character look cool feels so fake that the main character and his actions become a joke that is not funny