this story is great trust me bros the start is a bit slow but it picks up pace real good so don't worry also remember throw your powerstones at nyat
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Your story really builds the suspense pretty well and the pace is just right. It feels like a really well thought plot. I was left with so much questions and wanting to know more... so intriguing. I love mystery stories.
There are some gramatical little errors but it is a great start author. Please keep up the good work! I can't wait to know more!
I think most of us have read enough apocalypse and revenge novels already but this novel is simply mind-blowing! In my opinion, this is the most beautiful and interesting apocalyptic novel so far. This story has a lot more potential and positive content. I'm glad that I found this. I think I definitely stumbled upon a rare gem here.
Not only we have romance during the apocalyptic world, but there are also game abilities and kingdom building involved! Yes! You didn't read it wrong. They are all in this novel!
There were also some scenes that I cried a lot and there were some scenes that I felt really happy. Most reborn novels have just only narrated the MC's past life experiences but here it was portrayed beautifully through the MC's perspective. I even got emotional at some points when I read it.
I highly recommend this novel. It is so worth it !!! The only thing that I wish the author to fix is to release a longer chapter and more frequent. The author, please keep writing this book!
The MC is the type of character that falls directly into my "move on to next novel" territory. My score is unfortunately based on my experience of having just read Solo Levelling & Rise of a Porter and I really enjoyed them. I commend the hard work but the moments where something pivotal is about to happen so it immediately cuts to a different scene and the slow pace was very jarring so I only made it to chapter 23. I'm the type of person where if nothing has grabbed my attention and I'm up to chapter 20? It's definitely a no
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Great book unfortunately it was dropped or never picked up. So many gems fall to the wayside....its a pity........................... really ....................
#ActingWeak ? ? ? ?Umm? your Maxed Out.. While everyone Else is still Level 1..And you need to act weak? Why?
From when I started reading to where I am now, I would say that the concept of this story and the development is very good. The only thing holding this down would be that there are a lot of grammatical errors. So much so that I have to spend time trying to figure out what the authors means in some cases. While this takes away from the story, it isnt enough to stop me from reading this book! One advice I would give the author for improvement is obviously learning the english language, as well as trying to deepen the plot of the story! A couple examples I have from other books ive read would be that instead of the main character going through an event and then magically getting the ability to not register pain or care about pain, they make it so that the event is super discriptive and made it so that something happened to where the main character got used to pain. They describe it like, “Suwu felt like his skin was being flayed alive, his muscles being streched around his body, trying to compresses his bones into fine powder! His organs felt like they inflated so much that they were trying to rip apart his body to run away.” That type of discription. Anyway I just wanted to give my opinion because I enjoyed your story and can’t wait for you to devlop as a writer!
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Amazing thing, the events were fun, the character of mc is still volatile, mc is interesting especially to make humans a meal, but he must continue to drink blood, it is more useful than killing and getting a little strength because of the ring, and in order to hide evidence of it by burning or melting the corpses with some Solvent potions, good luck