the other comments have already said enough. after he got the fairy, it all went downhill FAST. its not worth the "high" rating it has, if you cant even make the mc consistent, then it already speaks volumes on the quality of your story
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Too many brain dead fools in this novel.
The only reason I got through 40 chapters of this is because I have low standards when it comes to beast taming stories, so I’ll read almost anything. I would say it’s an average story at best. It’s very predictable if you’ve read other system stories or beast taming stories. If anything, I felt like the number targets for the system were pretty unrealistic.
The translation is bad. Aside from grammar and spelling errors here and there, the translation is just sloppy. Although, there do seem to be less mistakes in the latter half of the 40 chapters.
it's good, but the MC hate for girls seems like a 12 old child, and his explanation for that is even worst. Every speech he made for why girls are so bad make me cringe, It's so annoying.
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Mr and Mrs Smith vibes all over again...
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Okay, firstly this is some fantastic execution of plot. The first chapter is captivating and keeps the readers interest till the very end. All in all a great way to start the story. Now what I didn't like was confusing dialogue quotations and punctuation mistakes. Though as we progress further in the story these mistakes reduce in number so, I might be nitpicking here. Other than that the story is fantastic.
Story sound awesome. But in my opinion, too many wish is not good. All the mc need is high intelligence. being smart enough too build his own AI. building a farm where no one could touch like a valley surrounded by the radiation watsteland and probably monster. mc is smart enough to build a teleporter allowing access to him and anyone he allow. removing two wish and making it fit more into the world. i don’t really like how something unnatural is pushed into the world. A supernatural power that can’t be explain squezed into a sci story.
This is a total cool OP story. i actually hate most OP stories but here the MC...let's just say I don't mind it. Anyways, the world building is very unique and the best thing in this story. It's a lot like Overlord type of setting but without the game like vibe. Just real life