This whole novel is trash I don't care if u delete my comment because u author know full well I am right I don't even know how this made it in the top 100
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I love the MC and other characters are actually living breathing people with their own problems and personality. The world settings is still been revealed as the novel is still at its initial stages overall it has potential but my only problem is the Romance I'd rather have no romance than forced romance the MC has never had a good opinion of Qin Yan she's beautiful and talented but that's it countless other females in the sect possess the exact same qualities but the MC has never been shown as one chasing after beauty. Yet she gave him an ultimatum with even asking for his opinion . Yet the next moment he has her name been mentioned he couldn't help but send her a letter ???????? Pls Don't ruin this great novel with bland tasteless romance . A great novel is not defined by the number of jade skined beauties chasing after the MC or by the number of girls the MC has slept with . Pls author don't go down that road...
the story is good and well edited, It was flowing smoothly and fun to read. it's characters have a well defined nature, smooth pacing and easy to understand.
I normally never write reviews but well I guess for that story I need to do it.When I started reading this book at first it was a really bad experience cause the English wasn’t understandable at some points and u were forced to use ur brain to get the lines. I mean my English isn’t good as well cause it’s not my mother language/tongue but the author didn’t even made the he/she or his/her correct BUT the story overall is really really great. The author and the story has a lot of potential. The system is really well thought out. Of course not perfect cause for system novels it’s hard to memorize everything and u will made fails with numbers/math at some point especially if u just started with writing novels ... Overall the author is doing a really good job. I’m enjoying reading this book and want to read more and more (sadly I’m on the newest chapter). So guys give it a try and stop writing on every chapter that the English/grammar is terrible... nobody is perfect ?? u all know how hard it is to learn a other/new language.
seems interesting enough so far. so far it's reminding me a lot of the lucifer system novel. i haven't read far enough yet though, so i don't know if that changes and it becomes unique. as for the writing quality, the english is very bad but it's still understandable. all in all, not a bad novel, reminiscent of the lucifer system novel. has potential