DetachedDreamer
WHERE IS IT WHERE IS IT WHERE IS IT
WHERE IS IT WHERE IS IT WHERE IS IT
WHERE IS IT WHERE IS IT WHERE IS IT
WHERE IS IT WHERE IS IT WHERE IS IT
hmmm.... usually I don't do reviews coz the books I read are work in progress but this time author mr. DoF convinced me otherwise.....
Plotline is Awesome, there are no plot holes till latest chappu i.e. 100, protagonist for once uses his actual head rather than the lower one, action is good, romance is good, comedy is good, static and dynamic description are great, side characters exist, young master r very rare, power of protagonist makes sense unlike few other games where it's all by being first one to do so, power progression is scaled logically so overall this is a great and enjoyable read...hope my review helps both the readers and the author......
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if u find this review boring then why have u read it to end?
Only made it to page 10, the Main character is mentally challenged with no backbone, i just cant take this anymore .........................
It's trash
..........ndjdudjdju jkdududkx..... Really why would QI pick novel this bad and discard other good novel......jdudndhdgxjcjchjxhxhxjxjx Qidian International is trash
Writing quality is good with almost no mistakes. But the story development is a bit dull for me. On the other hand the characters and fight scene are awesome. Maybe you will be improving the story more in the future or it has something up in the sleeves. But for now we can only wait for more chapters.
The author's creativity is immeasurable, and this story has great potential!
so, are you telling me that he can give cancer to others?
This book was intended for a new study of a little better or I would be able nothing more to say about it than I am so far from where I was going to be in my own mind
First there was ‘I Can Track Everything’, now there’s this. Next week’s trial read, there’s probably gonna be another book with a treasure tracking ability...
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the book is really good with a lot of sarcasm. the storyline is interesting about a person being so obsessed with normalcy. but one only wants normal till they get a taste of the real power. I really like the story. Kudos to the Author
I think that this was ok but there were some parts where it could improve in.
