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The story is great but the author writes in a twisty, jumpy manner that is extremely hard to follow sometimes. It’s like starting at the end of a chapter then being told the middle and having to just figure out the start. He also says the mf “speaks” when he is clearly thinking to himself as what he says has no baring on the people around him in the scene. Overall, it’s a good story and a great one if the author can fix some of these issues.
love triangle & dramatic ...............
Wow I just started reading this today & its really good. I am surprised how Jun Min & Jun Hua are so likeable as 2 different characters as one person. The story is fast paced. It's well written with some grammar issues but not bad enough to distract from the story. Sometimes the author gives us a bit of confusion with mysterious conversations but it gets cleared up later on. However why does the author keep mentioning that the MC is really beautiful even when she wear a veil. The public hasn't seen her face without the veil but they all assumed she is beautiful. Also I am assuming the ML is Shouji who has sharp eyes and can tell a guy dressing as a girl but not the reverse ? Hmmm.....what with that problem? Still it's a great story can't wait for some romance to happen.
good premisse, had potential, it's well written.
however, out of nowhere it got confirmed that it is a cultivation novel, people saying "mortals"
and don't even get started with the stupid logic of tiered cities, I mean has a lambo and a gigantic villa,but it sucks because it's from a low grade city?
so in the big cities are all the houses made of gold? do they fly? what are hey made of?
and the hidden cultivation families. .. . meh I thought it was going to be a urban fantasy with mild superpowers like hero academia, just more hidden, but it's not at all.
From the premise beginning this novel already has cringe, cliche, nonsense backstory haish.
Not worth it
Another great novel that went full retard in its reading base
The novel just started to release chapters in a somewhat consistent rate after months of nothing, and they already feel confident enough to charge like one of the big boys
You guys think that this is a bad novel, right? Seeing that it took so long for it to get voted, and the cover doesn't look that interesting, you're gonna regret not reading this soon. This is a good novel, that can crack you up everytime. Don't judge a book by its cover. ;)
Idk how to make reviews, but Ig this will do.
This is an amazing book. The whole story seems interesting and I can't wait to read more about it. The characters are very memorable, and this is a thing coming from me, who forgets the characters until chapter 50. So author, good job.
Honestly, it's not the cookie cutter plot that's the problem... it's how it's so forced... he knows he needs to be low key.... but chooses not to be... doesn't leave the sect... and leaves such easy clues I don't get why he's not killed already.... he's reincarnated but doesn't properly take advantage of that to the point that the reincarnation is pointless... it's like the author just wanted this system and then forces the cookie cutter plot.... and how bad is it you ask???
Author has him cleans his marrows with a pill while already having a cleansing system....
This is the best Chinese science fiction novel out there, and it's not even supposed to be science fiction! The world building is 10 out of 10.
this actually good original isekai novel but its look like author abandoned this novel because live matter and you can only read some new chapter on his patre page.
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