DetachedDreamer
While I do agree with the many comments complaining obsessively about how it's a copy/paste plot, there are still a few good redeeming qualities in this novel.The translation could use some help. There was one line where apparently Enoch was killed. Also, some of the consistency in naming & spelling would be nice (i.e. "Love Farm" > "Heart Farm" or "Heart Manor". "Divine Tree" > "Sacred Tree". Pretty sure Glenn had at least 3-4 different names & spellings)Sometimes it gets difficult to tell if Enoch is controlling the rat or is actually there. It feels like the author went back and forth between these two thoughts on many occasions.1. This is the first time that I've seen a novel involving an idea similar to the Divine Tree. The plant theme is definitely unique despite parts being obviously taken from Plants vs. Zombies.2. Alice's character is a unique take on the "future-seeing/information-dealer" type character.3. This is the first time I have seen "random" talents based off of a choice & lack of which choice gives which talent.4. *Perhaps the most interesting: I love the idea of the Dark Fog, the exploration, and the difficulty being based on the exploration.tl;dr > It is a copy/paste plot that has a few unique takes/ideas that made it enjoyable for me to read.
man said Mc gonna be stupid makes mistakes and stuff you did not say man gonna be stupid as in young masters ancestor stupid man doing the most stupidest things for a 15 year old and still did not figure out that everyone hates him this is why character development should start somewhere but not from here
The fact that this is getting pushed back in favor of novels below the fourth star mark shows that junk food has become way too popular. At least this has some nutrients. Donate your spirit stones for healthy living!
Short Title:TMOBAlternate Title:猛兽博物馆Status:Completed700Author:Dark EggplantGenre:Fantasy,Wuxia,XianxiaTags:Beast Companions,Beasts,System,Lin Jin didn’t expect that he would cross, let alone such a weird world, where he was respected by beasts. Fortunately, he had a museum of beasts.“Master, this is a half-dead little turtle…”“What tortoise? This is a rare beast pet with basalt bloodline and will be promoted to rank 7 in the future.”“Then what is this shed dog?”“Dog? No eyesight, this is the offspring of the Sky-Swallowing Dog, and there is a trace of Qilin blood. Listen to me, and quickly signed a blood contract to protect you in the future, and you will be invincible
This is awesome novel ....mc is not dumb ....world building is 5 star ....plot is set on china ancient mythology ....funny moments and suprises are there in almost evey part...there tinge of romance and harem but xan be tolrated but even the story dipicted these in a way that it become likable...great statergy inside and also mystery included ....you dont have to lower your IQ AND EQ for this story as its well written **i read this in lmntl (my senior brother is too cautious**** this novel is too famous in china quidan**
Don't stop writing, you can do it. Don't stop expressing, or you'll dull the skill. Don't stop improving, writer fever makes us ill. Don't stop having fun, story must be told and seen.
Well the premise is amazing and the story has a lot of potential unlike many other stories on this site the progression of the story is kinda slow but that's good in this caseby the way that part of the contract with the devil ends up going wrong later on and ends up becoming a very funny thing in chapter 128
Good Read.Great Story, cool choices for powers.Love it, can't wait to read more................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
This book is very interesting and funny it’s character development is very nice and when reading you get captivated. I really enjoyed reading it soo far because i kept smiling while reading and was moved I can’t wait for more updates the author has done a great job so far
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I get that you can write whatever you want, but it's really necessary to abord religions stuff? Why go to a road that really offends the largest religion worldwide? I'm so disappointed I lost my time. Please, put a tag and warn that your story is biased against Christians or other religions (I don't know because I've stopped at chapter 25)
