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The plot isn't the first of its kind but it is still a worthy read as it has a unique plot setting that differs it from your usual martial arts novel. Overall, this is a good choice for those who love to read RPG and Martial Arts.
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This story starts off with a good pace but lost traction real quick. He tells his family he’s from the future then he tells his best friend then he gets multiple girls involved like this is just a hearm starting novel so far I don’t want to sit here and read 24 chapters about how he’s going to cultivate and his his friends and family are going to learn magic. It’s so boring reading info dump after info dump. The story is all over the place and the main chars not likable. This novel isn’t for me.
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So far it is unique story it has good quality of transalation. I love the characters and how the story goes on. It makes me anticipate for more good chapters
Let's address the elephant in the room. The beginning is VERY similar to The Beginning After The End. That being said this book is very good, and it's characters are definitely different to TBATE.As far as this book goes... it's amazing. I won't go into to many details to avoid spoilers, but, unlike some books where one or two extras are sacrificed every now and then in the name of "character growth
I like the world so far as though it contains a few cliche elements it is combined in a way and with new ideas that make for an interesting setting and is probably the novel's strongest point.The characters so far have been pretty interesting though outside of a few core characters that are pretty interesting the side characters could be helped by being more distinct.So far the story is good. I wouldn't say amazing as hasn't gone anywhere deep so far, but good enough to keep me interested in how it will continue with some romance and actions. I would like to get some more intrigue and discovery related to MC, his ancestor etc blended with some story progression to elevate the story to a higher level.Now as for the only major downside is the writing quality. I suspect this is a translation rather than original work in English and pronouns are just an absolute mess. No he just him/her get messed up, but even those get messed up with I not infrequently which is a whole other level beyond even what I'm used to from rushed translations. It is even to the point where it can be distracting as I have to re-read paragraphs to figure out which pronouns were meant to be used to understand what the paragraph was supposed to mean.
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