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That one good synopsis...
It makes you wonder how the story will end...
The story at first is very light, well written, really good.
Kudos to the author...
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ok... it seems like an interesting story and the tension builds up real quick, there are too little chapters right now to give a concise decision about the story. The characters seem interesting though...honestly, I kinda feel they were too quick to blame the FL for the murder but after switching perspectives, it seemed more legitimate. Overall the story has potential. So do check it out.
I am a huge fan of The Originals and now Legacies. So, reading this book brought some happy memories to thought. I love the fact that it is told in the Male POV mostly as well.
this is well written. i like the pacing of it. a very good start. keep up the good work thank you for the novel i look forward to the development of the Mc. Please don't turn into a harem
it was interesting for like a solid 5 chapters. then is just became another copy and paste of the typical urban system mc template. speaks low, says he is content, says he just wants to be happy, but goes to the extreme with everything. judged people based on the 7 seven sins but became greedy the moment he had the opportunity. probs chinese readers complained.that he had decent interpersonal relation ships, mprals and not enough benefits and have slapping
Attention. A lot of frustrations are waiting for you.So for up to near 300 chapters author basically tortures the protagonist. And the protagonist has almost no character development. His naivety, poor judgements of characters or situations has yet to show any improvements. I know you will argue with me here saying that he's still 16 years old, but I'm only saying this according to other characters in the story.
This is MHA, not One Piece. Something like the Rokushiki shouldn't even exist. He is already overpowered. How much more will you provide to his abilities !! He is already the foookin strongest
Overall a good Story. Few points to highlight1. Initially Mc is super carefree and not much motivated2. There is no Exp obtained so he has to cultivate normally.3. He does no become OP anytime soon.4. His talent is low, so even with pills his cultivation is only fast not super fast.
Dont even bother.I read almost up to latest chapters around 500ish due to webnovel free novel deal, I gave it a shot.At first MC is supposed to be a “dragon” yet sneaks around for no reason but because he is being overly cautious. I have no issues with that but then he has some fetish of using his women as bait for a particular scheme and let them get molested. Thats where I draw the bottom line.You can hide, scheme and act. But there has to be a bottom line. Clearly the author is more interested in creating plot twists and schemes within schemes than making things make sense. Even a great schemer like Lelouch would never use his sister Nunally in his schemes. This work is a failed attempt at writing a scheming type of character yet having a strange dragon pride bloodline that doesnt matchThroughout the story, author loves showing how the MC acts stupid, wimpy etc to bait the enemies to attack etc. It repeats over and over. Then another common thing is for some reason his organisation has to clean house very often. Somehow ppl keep betraying his group. Cliche cultivation seclusion scenes. Cliche wife kidnapping scenes. Nothing new here or done better.Long monologues without any real story progression. MC powers up suddenly every 200chaps or so but somehow never levels up during time inbetween.Dont bother.
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