Writing quality: deteriorates. It started out okay but got worse as time went on, almost like the author stopped caring or fired his editor or something. Updating stability: good. I dropped this, so I don’t know if it stayed good, but at least it started out that way. Story development: scattershot and ruined. The premise of the story was very interesting at first, but it stopped being interesting when the author decided to have a time skip instead of developing the story he had already started working on. Now, keep in mind that it’s the *worst* kind of time skip - the kind where important things happen during the skip, but the author doesn’t bother informing you of them. The MC even gained and, I assume, lost love interests during the skip. It was jarring and ruined any bit of enjoyment I still got out of this because of its abruptness. Character design: horrible. In the beginning, the side characters only exist to worship at the altar of the MC. After the time skip, it seems like the characters only exist to annoy him. There’s no real in between. World background: bland and wrong. The author has no clue how westerners act, yet set his novel in the west. Further compounding that is that he sets it in the world of the uber rich, but doesn’t seem to know how to write rich lifestyles beyond “whatever’s the most expensive is the best.” All that’s missing are the common tropes: KTVs, car racing, and restaurants with private rooms. The author already refers to people as “Mr. Firstname” so I fully expect by now that more of the other tropes have shown up. Overall: this started out promising but got real bad real quick in every aspect. Don’t waste your time on it.
I catch myself peeking if there is an update few times a day .
Really well written great grammar and the story is smooth and gets you hooked .
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i really hope that the inner monster situation will turn up to be domination of stronger will (kinda like in bleach )
anyway cant wait for what will author bring
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(I'm really loving it so I'm gonna stay with "author" till the end)
this just copywriting from chinese novel, search 斗鱼之死亡判官 and you will find it, original chinese novel and FREE, if you not mind read it on MTL or Google translate.
This is the story of a poor young man whose poverty even shreds apart their family willing to climb his way through society and into the top.
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I like the story very much. My problem is that it seems to be extremly similar to Desilate era. While adding the additional cheats to the Mc, the stories seen way too similar.
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A non-berserk berserker!? how incredibly rare! It's a pretty interesting story so far which is saying something because I'm not really into gaming novels. My only complaint is that we don't have games like this in real life.
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i love this shameless smut. i hope you can make this story from MC's POV instead of system's. mind control, brainwash, and common sense change is good!
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It's a good novel and has an awsome plot and develooment I hope it will not dropped..........∞∞∞∞≠≠≠≈expexpexpexpexpeeexxxxxxxxxppppppppp∞∞≈∞≈∞≈∞
Right so I just finished reading the 60th chapter and well one thing for sure this is quite a fun read! Over the top reactions and several jokes here made me laugh and here there are some parts that made the Mc so damn cool like I felt adrenaline just reading it. It’s unique in it’s concept and I like the characters, I feel like the Mc is actually a good person and it’s surprisingly rare to find Mc’s like that. You know most Mc’s these days are cold, calculating or whatever or in Lin Fan’s case too much shamelessness. Really those type of Mc’s for me at least are Mc’s that I hate so much but it’s not a problem here. Fang Ran is cowardly, a little greedy, shameless kinda but when push comes to shove he’ll stand up and do the right thing, he’ll fight and kill for vengeance when someone he barely knows dies, he’ll go help someone despite the danger to himself and he’s honesty just a cool guy.
Okay I’m rambling here about his character but really it’s a good read and well I think it deserved a long review to convince some more people to read give it a try. Anyway thanks for reading, I hope you find this novel at least enjoyable