I will say it this is the best novel for 2019 in my opinion. I love it. All the other novel I read, I say it one of the best novel but this novel is different. To me if it continue like this, this novel will be in my top 2 out of 100 of 100 novel I have read In no time if it continue like this.
Why bring back a dropped novel and keep the ****ty translation? It doesn't matter if the new content is good if you can't get through the first 80 chapters filled with basically MTL quality ****
A story well written!
Young boys going on a adventure. A horror novel mixed with sci-fi and adventure. Author did a good work making up sentences. As a reader I got easily immersed while reading.
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heyo crazy cronie here,review on 31/03/2021 @chap373 (released chap till date: 444)review divided in: Short reviewLong review IMORatingsConclusionWarning (includes spoilers) short review: A must read story for harem fans. A good romance story but not for those who are coming after VRMMORPG tag. long review: pros: 1) Author did a nice job in romance here. A 'true hidden gem' for harem fans. 2) This is a little dark novel. But also has fluffy side. Contradictory huh? Read it and you might understand. 3) One word for world building: FANTASTIC! With put real hard work in creating the plot and the mystery. This world still after so many chaps is a mystery. 4) I love the writing format of the novel. Especially those moments of system (not a spoiler since it's in tags) but yeah! I loved it..5) Characters created by the author are awesome! They all feel real, they have their own personalities and ambitions, something many authors of these days lack.6) This novel surprisingly contains humor. Yeah ik there is a comedy tag, but despite the tag most of the novel do stupid jokes.. like fart jokes and the likes. This one I truly enjoyed the comedy moments.7) the interactions between the characters are awesome!! This is how conversations in reality takes place, something which cannot be easily portrayed! The interactions between the mc and his girls never failed to put a smile on my face at the end of the chapter8) I love how the author released few chaps with his girls POV (tho mainly focused on FL, but still a plus)cons:1) [NOT REALLY A CONS] As mentioned above this novel has a dark side despite the fluffy romance moments. (This depends person to person, for me a pro)2) [NOT REALLY A CONS] No probs with updates. My basic requirement with updates is (7ch/d for og) & (14ch/d for tl). But this is my personal scale so you might as well ignore it.3) There are few typo errors. No prob with grammar.. (well there are prob with pronoun at the last chaps i read like mistaking mc for she) but mainly spelling mistakes and misplacement of words. 4) The writing.. I already mentioned many times in my comments but it is confusing few times who is speaking what.5) Even though the interactions are awesome, we many times fail to grasp the emotions and facial expressions of the characters, since it's never mentioned what expressions the characters really have on their face. 6) pacing i felt sometimes it was little slow. It would have been better if it was a little faster. IMO:- maybe if the confusion of who is speaking which line is reduced it might become a better read- RATINGS: writing: 8/10 (pro-4&6 & con-3&4)update: 8.5/10 (con-2)plot: 8.5/10 (pro-1,2&3, con-1) characters: 8.5/10 (pro-5,6&8)pacing: 8/10 (con-6)dialogues: 9/10 (pro-7 con-5)entertainment: 8.5/10OVERALL: 4.2/5 Conclusion:As a harem fan, I would definitely want this novel to get more attention!! Also to the readers please support this novel with at least powerstones if possible!!And thanks to the author for the chaps as always! WARNING: *SPOILER (not exactly)*- MC may seem a little edgy.- rather than a anti hero, one might as well refer him as evil- sometimes mc is sharp and sometimes dumb (there is a reason tho)- mc is dense af!
Probably the best fanfic I've ever read. 5* on everything except the translation (which sucks big time!)Unfortunately it seems to have been left at around chapter 240 here, u can read the rest on MTL (just Google search it, you'll see comrademao.mtl link). Has some really interesting uses of some mons (especially Tyranitar who has been given some powers of Groudon). Use of Psychic is pretty impressive too.
This novel is very good. MC is very OP but that's 99% of the novels. NPC's feel like real people who react to the world and are smart. The author here borrows from Naruto and reincarnation of the strongest sword god.
I'm leaving this review because I actually think the concept for my story is pretty solid. Basing the story during the modern day, and seeing how fictional creatures and ideas react with the modern world is cool. I'm also going to try to improve my writing quality with each chapter.
im happy because the author adds classical songs in the story (bcos im a sucker for classical music lol) and not only that, the way the author describes is so beautiful. the story is great, keep up the good work! ?
The character developements are fun and kinda makes sense. The romance, altough awkward from the start, gradually becomes quite realistic adding to the fact that they are each others first love. The fight scenes are enough to give us action; not too much that it takes over the story which is "Seeking the Dao". There are things that the MC realises and they are applicable too. Not much is revealed because the MC is still in the Novice Village but some World Backround are well thought.
The cover hooked me and the premise made me jump in, lurking me to read some epic story. Unfortunately, it was not the case. That first chapter killed it for me. The grammar and writing were terrible but I pushed through expecting some ameliorations or at least a main character that will help me struggle through the errors poking my eyes. I'm not saying the story is bad. The ideas are good but the execution is terrible. Dear author, please, don't give up. But I beg you to fix your writing.