so far at 70 chapters in this is really solid, good power structure, nothing over done, and everything even the magic has a sense realism, first 20 to 30 chapters was rather slow bit once he starts building the family things get interesting real fast, and it seems like the author knows this sense he made it free till chapter 53, I recommend giving it a shot till the pay wall at least then see if you like it, but chances are if you get to it you won't want to stop
I would say the route taken byvthe author is different, to me it is not a serious book, i mean the action, calculations, intrigue are not that serious, sometimes it seems the story jumps around, like people accepting new things just like that, some people acting like a gang one time, and the other acting like secret company soldiers, the best way i can describe it is the avengers movies and the lego avengers movie, this book is the lego avengers movie.
second review
overall the novel is pretty good though you'll have to get deep enough to actually reach the good stuff
TL:DR, Just another chinese cultivation trash that may or may not be worth your time.
Ok. Ch: 30 and it's really an enjoyable read so far. The character development was a little abrupt at the beginning but author managed to smooth things out. Keep going. Nice book.
Great story set in a world of sword and magic(Mainly magic). Has a solid world and power system. This story is still new but its looking good i would recommend this story for people with a littel patients as its currently new with few chapters but will fill up in no time if the release rate keeps up at this rate
Hola me. Gusta mucho tu novela pero tengo un fetiche no se si puedas incluir una escena ntr pero que no sea de chantaje que sea voluntario gracias
11/10 would read again
This is a book with things
It is mostly about humans
It is also mostly complaints about humans
yeeeeeeeeeeeeeet
Hinest opinion: I like it very much
This book is one of a kind. Totally different from the system books I've read. The grammar is excellent and makes reading super fun.
At first, I didn't know where Ed and his grandmother disappeared to until I read your note.
If only he'd known how hellish choosing to be a system would be, he would have done to the world instead. I hope all his sacrifices and suffering are worth it.
There is nothing to criticize about it book it's wonderfully written and the description is splendid. Kudos to the author.
read the first 26 chapters and it's better than me progression and story wise, the latter a little better than me, overall very good
I haven't started reading this book but I just added it to my library. But the reason I am writing this review is because I just noticed that the Author's from Nepal. So, consider this review, a support from chimeki.