CONTINUE AND GOOD LUCK
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The story and character development is nice, especially with absence of calamity which you would normally see in stories like this, the only problem is the repetition on chapters and different scenes in the middle of another, it makes the reading unenjoyable, I do hope the author sees and gets a new translator or something
A good start & ..below is just a paragraph I copied from somewhere ?games, a gacha typically takes the form of a machine, roulette wheel or other randomization engine that allows players And yes, I know we present what we want the world to see, but I truly do think it's genuine. I think she is someone who really cares about people - especially kids - and wants to give them better lives and opportunities.
nice plz dont stop villan type novel are rare nowdays .........................................................................................................
The novel is... OK?The starting was quite fantastic and the ideas are quite good.The main problem here is why would author post useless chapters without any contents? Asking readers to read somewhere on another platform? I really hate it. There is only 'The chapters 1 to 25 or 26 to 50 are posted on Bla Bla Bla' made me mad!Why would you post chapters here? I feel like that you are using this platform as an advertisement for gathering readers.Note: I have read only first 45 chapters only.Now comes the review about story. The problem in this novel is:The main problem here is every'thing' distains MC. For god's sake, he's someone from a huge background but from the very start, even the mobs and side characters are showing distain and I'll intent toward MC as if he's a beggar and useless person.Evey single place, Every single event, MC is distained by people and MC and his supporters do not do a thing or don't even know a thing.My head hurts while reading such novels! Why would you write something like that? Is MC a mascot? Is MC a goody guy who spares everyone? I can't say...The background is very confusing. Is he someone with strong background? or is he from a normal/mid level background? Everyone distains him and makes me confused.Then the world background is also very confusing. What are the ranks of Aristocrasts? One guy says he's from Gu or whatever empire he is and show distain to MC and it turned out that he have a weak background. He was acting so arrogant that I felt that he had same background as MC. It's so bad that it started to kill my remaining brain cells.The chapters are messed. Some chapters are available on one site, while some are only available on other sites. It's so troublesome that I had to switch 3 different platforms to get a good amount of chapters to read.
There is nothing much to story. All the characters are one dimensional. the story even his girlfriend getting forced to another guy. There is only face slapping.nothing else.
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I really like this game. I hope it gets more updates and that it gets through the voting system already. I want a mass release!!!! Though the premise reminds of the Prodigal novel, it's very different. This novel has more depth and personally, I think a lot more thought and research has gone into writing this. A system novel executed well!
I just found this story tonight, and the first few chapters were such a Turn OFF. THE TUTORIAL TAUGHT NOTHING, JUST PISSED ME OFF.
SHOULD CHANGE THE NAME OF THE STORY TO
ONLINE DUNGEONMASTER, which would be more inline with the actual story, not this DECEPTIVE NAME IT HAS NOW.
Good story. Nice building up, and good idea. I hope its going to be fully translated.
I really enjoyed this story. I would definitely use SS to unlock chapters if they started translating again. Start to TRANSLATE AGAIN please. Thanks