Getting better, please improve more, like the items name, magic items, equipment stuff and something like that. Well the Monster is kind normal i think. But idk maybe u save beast monster for later.
this novel is not worth reading on webnovel as it only begins to tell the story before ripping the rest of the book away as part of an Amazon deal. if it can't even be read why has it been posted? it is kinda sad considering that it looked like a decent story
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Tis not bad and to be honest, it's better than some that I've seen on here so I'll give this story a fairly good rating mostly because the plot isn't bad, but it's also generic. But overall it is ok....at least to me
Her uncle said he will help alina if she needs help vs the s rank intruder and nooow all of the sudden for drama, he cant help her cuz they can only help if the intruder is z. Which also makes no f sense cuz its not against other humans but f intruders who want to destroy humans like w t f. For reals are those authors even thinking, i understand some minor errors if its 100ts of chapters in but its chapter 16 and already massiv brainlagging author so frustrating cuz it happens like in every f novel.
In new worlds like no world buildign at all, world trees couldnt think about solutions a human mc can come up with in a span of couple hours.
how did this get 4,5 stars i will never understand rly 1 of th worst novels.
The writer of this novel is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15.
So many actions!! I couldn’t put the book down! Really good! You are a very talented writer! Must keep going. The main character is so prevailing and the mystery just keep on going!
Love this. Too funny. The system is a troll. I need moarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The way how you make the mc cruel is something few will do and succeed in making you did that and I like how you make it that even arrogant people have intelligence so it seems more realistic (unlike almost every other cultivation manga).
This story gonna blow up soon! Love the story so far! The plot is an intresting take on an overused narrative but the author makes it work with awesome character development and world building. Give it a try!
Good novel, but the grammar, structure, writing quality, etc, leaves a lot to be desired. Frequent spelling errors, incorrect or poor word choice, among other problems leaves me with no choice but to rate it as I did. the novel is above average for webnovel but thats not exactly a high bar.
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