Yamatosan15
After reading the raws (up to chap 300) I'm quite disappointed. I'm an avid fan of beast taming novels and this one made me feel sad for how the writing quality deteriorated from the beginning.He actually became a Gary Sue. Shi Yu easily fixed every problem that he faced. No hardship whatsoever. The only think that kept me going is the evolution patterns of his beasts. He kept getting stronger and stronger, most materials for evolution were handed out to him by the Gem Cat and even Eleven finished 3 inscriptions after meeting the Turtle of Emperor Wu. I didn't see him struggling that much. He constantly made research discoveries from the Iron eating beasts to the Green Cotton worms. He contracted a high level overlord heroic spirit in an instant, you can even say that even though he had a test. He still easily passed it. There a lot of other scenes like these in the novel where he is basically the darling of the universe and all things go in his way.There are also a lot of anime references. From the heroic spirits, dragon ball, and reincarnated as a slime. Honestly, at first I was not bothered but I really dislike how the author almost copied all the concepts. Emperor Shidi had built a ruin where you can contact Heroic Spirits of the past, a strong purification totem reincarnated as a slime, and a dragon ball appeared that helped woth buggy's evolution.Lastly, I really dislike how outrageous the novel is. For example, when he went into the Dragon Palace he created a department. Oh, he also defeated the 2nd and 3rd prince of the dragon palace. Currently, he even decided yo create a movie. He also sucked the time ruin in imperial university. Cracked emperor Wu's ruin. And many more. And all of the characters reaction are always "I've never seen anything like this" or "all beasts and humans are stunned and shocked" the fact that he can ALWAYS shock totem level beasts are outrageous and repitative.Honestly, the start was good but the writing went downhill. I'm hoping that the author don't do these things in the future.I don't knlw what I'm writing but I'm just really dissatisfied with how the novel had become.
simply blatant copy of the legendary mechanic..........................................................................................................................................................................
The author of this novel must have a strong inclination with math subject! Anyway, the concept is good. Please continue updating. I hope to see this novel be completed!
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I liked it for not having a system, the MC could have a type control the technology he can enter the "internet" with his mind understand the machines and a lot more
This book is just an extension on the author's depraved mind because he just keeps adding characters only to kill them in like 100 chapters just to make the main characters feel miserable. Personally I wouldn't recommend this book to anyone The plot is shitty and no good comes from spending money on this bookFor you'll giving this book 5 stars, you really need to be checked mentally
Very good novel and from what I see in the interactions he is an intelligent protagonist. Great great great great great great great great great great great great great great
This story is one of the more interesting ones released for this trial batch. To be honest, I’m a sucker for beast taming stories and this is one of the more interesting ones. It’s got a unique premise that kept me interested after getting past the slow pacing in the beginning and the world building is pretty good. You can definitely tell that the author put some serious thought into the world. I also like how the MC’s power isn’t OP. It comes with some very reasonable limitations.
That being said, there are some flaws with this story:
1. The classic blasé attitude the MC has when they realize they’ve transmigrated. This is a huge pet peeve of mine as I don’t think it’s a realistic reaction no matter how many transmigration stories they read in their past life.
Hello,
i really like this Novel, it has the right mindsetting, a good development and the Mc has Enemy’s that can actually think.
In this Novel characters wont be discarded as soon as they lost their purpose but will come again with a deeper meaning.
I hope that the Novel gets more support.
Thanks for the Work
wow good i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!
You should read this novel.
I highly recommend
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wow good i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!
You should read this novel.
I highly recommend
Like my comment please
Really laidback, story pacing is very good, it a fun’s read and although the MC is cautious, he doesn’t shy from a fight if he has too if it’s to protect his babies
if there is similar Cultivation novel as this one, please recommend it to me as long as it's cultivation world/Yuri/female lead or Modern Cultivation world/yuri
