Poor unlucky John...the last of his family, his brother, died and all he's left with are the massive debts his parents left behind. His brother has also left him with a special edition capsule for latest VRMMO. While he envisioned them playing together, at he's given John the tools to hopefully pull himself out of the gole and create his own legend!
Um....did we mention our hapless MC is unlucky?? Qhat ensues is hilarity as he builds his own legend in-game!
I don’t even know what’s going on, the writing is so bad. It at least has an Interesting premise though. The book has an obvious non native english speaking author. No world background (that I could tell) and if there was any character development in the dialogue then I couldn’t tell.
I think the titan character race could do with being a bit more unique besides just “imagine a man... but big..” but that’s just a nitpick.
If the author gets better at English or gets an editor that doesn’t mind all the work it would entail to edit this then this honestly would be a good story I think. We need more crafting stories overall.
