let's be honest you know I am Handsome..ok ok here comes real thing:
This Novel is Gems.. Among recent Trial it is quite good. MC character is fantastic.
New reader will love it.
old reader will enjoy it.
MC cheat is quite good. Story is well written.
world background is interesting.
so read it ok.
by the way I am handsome then you.
The novel is rushed, the world building isn't there, the characters including the MC are stale, just mention he/she is there and that's it. the numbers are all over the place, one chapter it said he gained 100 million energy points, next chapter he has 20million, one time he has some weird stats named flame intensity at level 2 the next one it is lvl9 or something... he gains powers without explaination or reason like he got "godly" seeds or something OUT OF NOWHERE and nothing to explain how the feck does the flame even have those things on it's person without burning it to the ground... plus the fact that they are special and can be planted into barren earth and somehow still bear food... I mean even fanfictions are written better than this novel honestly...
This feels like a cheap novel with nothing interesting about it other than the initial concept.
This book is so wooow and sad at the same time I can't wait to see how persey will survive in the fae land am glued to my phone 24 hours a day reading it
The story is good. but the release are slow...
This story is pretty interesting and updates are consistent, so have five stars from me!
Anyways, I'll definitely be following along and I hope you finish until the end. :D
Nerve-wracking. The descriptions contain enough information to create a complete picture. It feels so vivid to the point that not breathing seems natural.
I Remember I read this and loved this novel before and stopped because chapters weren't translated...On to the story..Mc gets tricked by a system and is transmigration to a low-level magic world...gets his protagonist halo stolen by system.."He" dies and Remnant soul is born because resentment. Mc is willing to abandon everything for power...Also keep in mind that He is A remnant soul so what makes a person..person is not there,his real soul probably already reincarnated. He wants to become his own person and doesn't care about his "Real self"..His goal is to become god..
trash mc's a moron, the vr game is also trash, it will only give you i hunt this monster, it gives exp now im level 300 blah blah blah most of the game part is skipped and only tells his level, the city name, some monster name thats it, there's not even an npc, no quest either he just grind kills monster then max level trash
What I like the most in this story is the character. They are very light, the whole story is. This feel very refreshing and again, light. I hope there will be more chapters
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The story's eye-catching and most of all, thrilling. The flow is not too slow, and also not too fast. Just the right speed for the readers to enjoy.
It's slightly difficult to predict how the plot is going to be because there's only a few chapters, but I see that there's definitely some plots within plots, and with more plots. I'm looking forward for more updates.
To improve the novel more, I think that adding commas in between the long and tricky sentences would be a good idea so that the readers could understand more.