Honestly, I tried to like this because I like this genre, but it was so painful to read that almost didn't finish to the end of the trial. It could be improved for sure and has the potential to be a face-slapping, system owning, boss of a story...but not there yet and that makes me sad.
Positive:
1.) Kindergarten level plot that is easy to follow and predictable with no need to use your brain. A good relaxing veg book with zero suspense.
2.) A plot that involves gaining "treasures"....I'm a dragon, so that is a Positive to me.
Negative:
1.) Kindergarten level plot that is too easy to follow and painfully predictable. The argue could be made that there is no plot so far other then the MC gets stuff for free and he needs a girlfriend...not even a why or how he gets the 'system'
2.) Shoves the word "handsome" in every sentence the MC is involved(this book is ABOUT the MC!) and introduces every female with a rating instead of a description...
3.) No big villain intro, or character developing scenes. Not that I mind an OP MC, it's just that I'm also a fan of badboys too:)....a shame
Please Choose This Novel....i love crime action based novels...this is my third novel since crazy detective and genius detective that is going on in wuxiaworld reading this kind of novel
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too arrogant ima slam my head against the wall srsly why such low quality writing and extreme fking arrogance, it hurts my head no joke like im gonna ruin this dudes life because he messed up my train of thought.
just another trash racist novel courtesy of some of china's low life's. not worth your time. *************†********††‡‡‡‡‡‡‡‡‡‡”_:"+$+$;$;$+±_;$+$(_;
Well it's my first time reviewing, so if there is any grammar mistake pls forgive me. well for the first
6 chapters it will be not that good but after that
the novel is awesome. Read it
the whole thing is s*** it's nothing but another author with a God complex every other sentence is death God this and death God that when his original name is reaper to start with then moves to death then it goes to death God and then he just spams it out with everything don't waste your time with this novel
E-Elon, what are you doing there!? You’re hallucinating! Stop smoking so much weed and get onto building that rocket! ASAP!
........................................................................................................................................ welp a good story... what else ya want me to say ,go read it.
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Very raw.
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Overly passive and too reliant on another story to progress the plot. Not much happens to MC since he's just a blade of grass powering up, and all the plot is around Shi Hao and friends. It's almost like a bait and switch.