I love how the story flows, not too fast and not too slow.. the first chapter is also cool.. it's like I am reading a manga book in words. the imaginative world is also cool.. keep it up
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Already enjoying the flow of the story. I enjoy the fact that the MC in the game is unrecognizable IRL. Makes the chance of her being uncovered IRL almost nill.
Overall its pretty good, however, I'm so confused as to how it goes from being about using runes to using beasts. Had it gone from using just runes to using both runes and beasts it would have made more sense.
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The power system alone was already enough to hook me. But then again this novel has all the things I look for in a novel. The chapters that I've read are also very interesting.
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if you like low key protagonist then welcome abroad, the world building is good, but side characters are not so great, antagonist are good so read it
I read up to 78 and quit at 78. Even though the author said that he doesn't like girls who blush at everything, I read until 78 and there are girls who blush at everything and your understanding of romance is really bad (a girl with little acquaintance sees the main character while fighting and is affected. Then she kisses the main character without saying anything and has a happy ending) to say I would like the author, this is not rheumatism, this is a scene set to impress adolescents, I left it in 78. If there is such a scene, it exists in the future. Author, I hope you don't delete the comment. (I'm sorry if there are wrong words, my native language is not English)
Ok. This is a great series with a rather fast pace. I thought the MC will meet another person after 20 or 30 chapters, but I shall keep this spoiler free.
Anyway, the description in this novel is good. You will be able to get the detail the author put in. However, some parts are also ticking me off, making them feel like a chore to read them (At least for me).
Overall, this novel has some potential. It can only get better if the world and characters get some more depth later on. If you like an apocalyptic Earth setting, this one has a unique cause. So, feel free to read it.
Honestly the best VR novel I have read, and I have read a lot of these. Some key things I’d like to point at that are done well.
-The MC uses the knowledge from his reincarnation logically
One of the big things that grates on me in other reincarnation novels is the MC not capitalizing on knowing the future markets to make money since it just isn’t logical. This novel on the other hand does a great job.
Another great point is how power scaling is done in this novel. Typically novels in this genre will have the MC gaining insane advantages but still having trouble and barley scraping by against a bunch of players. Authors do things like stalling the characters growth or making endless enemies at slightly lower levels, however in this novel the MC faces logical challenges and setbacks. There are no cliche one dimensional characters that just serve to further the word count. The author does a great job making the challenges logical, higher level NPCs, people searching for his location, and a very intricate plot.
Probably the best thing about this novel however is the lack of plot holes. I don’t know how the author does it but with a constantly entertaining plot and nothing contradicting 10/10.
I will complain however :( the chapters are too short. I’m currently all caught up with privlage chapters at 221 but waiting a week for ~13 chapters and then finishing them in a bit over an hour makes me sad.
If you read this review please add a few hundred more words per chapter :) :) :) or maybe even double the length lol :) :)