This is a extremely good novel in many aspects. The author developed the plot at a good pace while still adding context and explanation when it was needed. It was a very refreshing read and I would definitely recommend it
While I was quite invested initially. Over time the book become convoluted and too confusing. There were time-skips/changes which at the time weren't explained well and led to me just skimming the pages, hoping to get back to the story. So while the grammar was good and the story seemed fun, I was just unable to get back into the story and my interests had faded.
The basic aim of this novel is to basically try and parody the common tropes of most CN’s while still trying to maintain a sense of originality. A difficult task to do but I think this author has succeeded to some extent. I love the comedy and originality. While I do feel the comedy is a little forced in areas it’s still good.
The only downside to this novel so far for me I think is that the lewd scenes certainly feel forced. I think this novel would definitely benefit from less or more naturally occurring ones. While it was nice and funny in the beginning, now that the characters have more depth to them, I just think it takes away from them.
However, I love where the author is going with this novel and hope he continues to write more chapters. Tbh, with his release schedule I’m kind of worried about burnout.
Author san, why is there anime tag in this story.
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author is quite flagrant about the word count. regularly duplicates paragraphs(sometimes up to 3 per chapter), finds ways to repeat info of before & after upgrade. so getting passed these things the story is very well written and enjoyable, which makes the word count thing even more so frustrating to be honest.
Coming back here once again, i can still say that this has been an amazing read thus far.But there has been no news from the author for a while now and I'm sharing to worry something happened to them. I hope they are okay and that they know we are still waiting for him and the continuation of his amazing works, if he ever plans on it.
Shameless review from me, this is a novel inspired by one-piece, Konosuba, and many Isekai genres. I have high hopes for my own novel to be what I expected "make your imaginations come true." I do not force the heck out of y'all to read, but like all many authors, I'd be pleased if you read it and give it a critic or comments. To me, my writing need some improvement, and yes, this book's words are also modified/paraphrased by AI, I'm not afraid to admit it, but there are my own original creative words. Regardless, I used AI to both study and improve my writing and grammar incorrections. Pleased to know more about your thoughts.
Its so refreshing reading a story on here with an MC who isn't a bloodthirsty psychopath. OP MC, but there's enough actual character rather than cardboard that the story is still more enjoyable than 99% of the repetitive stories on here. Recommend giving it a try.
Passed 5 novels on fan count while there's 2 "stolen" novels on trial reads and had 4.8 rating yet still didn't get chosen, more proof that webnovel doesn't really care about the readers.
I cant be the only 1 that can relate to Byung. It is scary how similar we are
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Nice story..