Evinie
Author goes full r****d mode after 40 chapters. No content literally just reactions to what MC did even skips the battles and just mention them in a passing sentence. He wastes the cheat despite having plenty of points to spent. And then there's utterly moronic gimmick to force relationships and what the government does. Random bet can somehow force people to be together and if they don't then no one can touch the woman ever, apparently has no effect on the male side and doesn't need the woman's consent to be active. Government legit assuming MC is cheating.... As in actually claiming MC is cheating in a game that has the power to force everyone to play it and change the entire word to its likeness... I pray this absolutely dogs**t stays in the garbage bin it belongs to...
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So the story is just another form of "I can turn into a fish" almost the same powers, turn into a fish can eat them and can dominate lower lvl fish, modify fish, and evan the money making idea to sell fish is the same. Sry to say this since I usually am nice but this feels like a copy right situation.
After reading 60 chapters, the story has really intrigued me. I usually don't give 5 stars to story development but this one is a refreshment after all the xianxia I've read on this site.
This story is much more practical and relatable as strength doesn't solve all the problems here, the MC uses tactics since he is physically a normal person. There's fair bit of politics involved since he is the son in law of an earl whose enemies want to remove him from power. There are moments that might make you stressed about what he will do, at the same time the story has funny elements and is not all time stressful.
I suggest you give it a try as I'm sure most people will enjoy this read.
Are you fucking kidding me??? Shitty ass god of fishing got picked instead of this! Wtf, stupid ass ****os on this site will take that! Fucking fishing!? Now i have to read mtl which is complete loss of fucking braincells.
I've read upto chapter 39 and this are my views so far.
1. Great world buildup, the whole ancient technology turned vr is really good and the back intime thing too.
2. The mc's buildup is a little underwhleming considering he was one of the most powerful players is hard to believe given his choice in equipment and skills.
3. A good rpg gamer knows that although active skills are important, passive skills are a great boon especially in early and late stages, but so far with his low mp he ends up choosing all the active skills with really no passive boosts, at least mp regen skill or mana potions or something.
4. Before he died the mc used quite a few skills. Then you said that they could use skills in the real world. but then his mother gets into an accident and instead of using the skills from the game he decides money matters first, with the possible case of amnesia or even memory loss don't you think the mystical power of the skills would do better than modern medical means, also if they need certain conditions or lvls to use skills in real life you should have specified them early on.
5. Now the last, mc has a cheat weapon, it can gain lvls by 'devouring' other equipment, but instead of feeding every equipment you sell most why? since devouring basically any equipment gives it exp then super grind of equipment should have been the way to go. And the mc's constant fear of using better equipment is unfounded in my opinion.
But anyway this are all purely my opinion and views and you are the writer and you can do anything you want, but im just laying it out there so that maybe it will help in your endeavours.
It feels like the writer took Kiran from end of the devil's cage and put him in a new world. Like with Kiran, I expect him to gain everything, lose almost nothing, and eat whatever he sees. It feels great and as one of the smartest MC's, even though there might be a lack of impulsiveness might be slightly sad, you'll never truly see the plot armor. This I love, from there my love.
This novel is better than 90% of cultivation novels out there. The starting is great. The mc is a unique one. Rather than follow the protagonist like lost puppy he is pretty much doing what he wants and hinders the protagonist. I've read upto the 20th chapter. Very good novel.
Amazing work, love th MC and his attitude on the Mafia life!!!!!!!!!This is a great read and extremely captivating!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep up the great work and release more chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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What is with this batch of trail reads? This is a very short read 400 or so chapters total? That's barely a few months worth or reading! There is also a novel that's up for selection that is only 200 or something chapters and has been on hiatus for god knows how long.
