Re reviewing. The plot gets better around ch 26. We get to know more about the other Nations and Lucas's background. The writing quality looks to be increased.
the story is good from the start and the Mc is to OP not until on chapter 30+ and when Fubuki is from another world too and he know all the plot and the you know is not what you think she's annoying keep asking the mc about his past and power and the suddenly become a simp and dumb he tell all his power to Fubuki and all he's secret as well....
I just waste my time reading this!!!!
The story has a lot of potential but the bad grammar ruins it,I can understand the fact that english is not your main language but you can have someone proofread and fix your work if possible.
I love this story so much, It’s so hard to find a book with an evil male mc setting since all of them are trashy harem novels with no really psycological analysis of a real evil person.The usual trope of the person having an awful past that made evil is so overused and so boring. I wanted to see someone that purely evil and mental in the head.
Onlike other books , the author made sure to actually introduce this character to us readers, how he acts, how he thinks, how he’s supposed be and what should we expect.
And I love that in this, the MC actually act his mental age ( of course using his physical bodies age as an advatage to manipulate and such).
Really I’m in love with the novel, wish the author would update more often but I understand the struggle of a writer, how writer block can be a pain the butt and that writing a perfectly good book demands patients. I’m just praying The chapters don’t get locked and I have to pay ( okay not at least until next year).
Fun to read.
idk why it stopped though
hope this can start updating............ ......
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Definitely a different kind of story. This MC is actually old and has an adopted blind daughter. Unfortunately, I don't see much potential in the series. MC used up his system savings of around 30 years, just to obtain the technique to break into Foundation. With such an advanced age and troublesome daughter, the novel reads more like a slow slice of life story of a guy slowly getting stronger while taking care of a daughter that will definitely either get bullied a lot, or turn out to be a hidden super expert.
It's not bad per se, but also not very engaging.
Too much garbage reviews without anyone having read the novel. Agreed it's not the best but the number of people down voting just because of ri is ludicrous
As of this moment I already have read up to where the locked chapters are (around chapter 56), so I think it's already enough to write an initial review. So, the pros about this novel is that it is written comprehensively. There are little to no technical errors such as incorrect grammars and spellings. Next is that it has little bit of a blend of other genres with eastern fantasy at its base, and don't get me wrong, I like this kind of creativity. Now for the cons, although it is already that promising from its pros, the novel is not that immersive as I thought it would be. The cultivation realms was explained in the novel but the cultivation system was not properly explained. There are no information about the cultivation techniques or battle techniques the characters used. The fights are so short, few ,and lack a lot details. It lacks the thrill of what a eastern fantasy novel is known for. It's pace is like a wish fulfillment fanfic just on a lesser degree. And although it was creative of blending other genres in a vast setting such as eastern fantasy, the novel already restricted itself by focusing more on destiny destiny what not. It kind of limited its potential.
And btw, this is just my own opinion and experience in reading the novel. It is not the sole truth about this novel. Others or you might think or experience differently compared to my thoughts on the novel. So, be mindful of that.
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A lot of cliches and nonsense. dieing sister, “fixes” a vr helmet ( if you can do that why dont you have a job?), gets a talent to create pets in the vr game( the one good point is i havent seen this exact power ) and proceeded to act like a normal Chinese mc in anyother story. There is little development (other then what the author adds in without much support or thought) and honestly i dislike the mc for some reason
While an intersting concept, but its poorly executed with too many cliches.
The world is barely developed, characters and their backgrounds feels rushed and underdeveloped, especially the MC, who arrogant duche that just couldn’t grow too like, even a little bit. Along with that the system feels under utilized and badly explained.
And overall the story feels to fast paced and plot driven for my taste.
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