I Was Betrayed by My Colleagues and Pretended to Commit Sui**de

BOOK 2 please

Author goes full r****d mode after 40 chapters. No content literally just reactions to what MC did even skips the battles and just mention them in a passing sentence. He wastes the cheat despite having plenty of points to spent. And then there's utterly moronic gimmick to force relationships and what the government does. Random bet can somehow force people to be together and if they don't then no one can touch the woman ever, apparently has no effect on the male side and doesn't need the woman's consent to be active. Government legit assuming MC is cheating.... As in actually claiming MC is cheating in a game that has the power to force everyone to play it and change the entire word to its likeness... I pray this absolutely dogs**t stays in the garbage bin it belongs to...

I felt itchy...                                                                                                                                                  

1. No background story for the characters2. Bland characters3. Story development is just burn things, find/help people, get stronger/unlock things then repeat4. Rules for the system is not explained and followed5. The story is not using writing techniques to deepen the plot progression

I've already read this for a while, but only recently I could give a review because I've been busy with my own novels. Nevertheless, this is a good book. It's themes match it's target audience, yet the storytelling technique is simple and easy to understand. Descriptions are being executed greatly. Sometimes they can be a bit too much and halt the story direction, but the information is there to slowly build up everything: characters,  setting, mood, etc. All in all, I'd recommend this for readers who want an action-adventure reading experience, but you may have to be patient towards the slow build up, because it is necessary to paint the clear picture of the story for you.

Slow start, but I feel it works better for the detailing of the world, as well as building the characters so far. I've always liked novels involving crafting or building based abilites, so this is perfect!