It is cool and amazing story, your written so neat and i like your novel Author. Highly recommended, auto collect to my library.
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35 chapters so far and I'm really enjoying this so far. really hope it gets picked up.
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the story concept is interresting, the world around it could use some more work, the romance ... are man really this dense? or did i just oversee the dense protadonist tag?
the romance also makes me feel like the mc is somehow gay or stuck at the age of 10 mentally. even the children have more EQ then him. just looking at his dungeon name. how can he not relayse till now what a morningwood is??
leaves me with the question: what did he do at school, because in todays society even they know.
sadly the only thing keeping me going for now was the interesting farming concept.
to the autor, don't let my critice put you down. i belive with more work you will surly get better over time. just use the readers view to better yourself, every start is hard. but also do not allow everything we write to you, its your story and your idea. put warning in the prologe this way no one can complaine to you later for ignoring them.
best wishes and continue writing
ps english is not my native languagr so please excuse the mistakes. thanks
Yah there's potential here, and you can tell it was definitely inspired by "mushoko tensei" which isn't a bad thing, that's how most stories are made. However I just can't, get with the pacing. It goes by 1 year, 2 year, "after three years of doing dah, dah, dah; I have yet to improve. Don't think it to be boring to explain what happens in those couple years. This builds the word around us and let's us get to know the characters struggle.
I really like it, sadly it has been some time since the last update
Author please check the grammar and proof read the story. The sentences are weird and don't make sense. The idea is great but the writing breaks immersion.
Interesting story.
I recommend this book.
You'll always want more of the next chapters.
Surely adding this to my library.
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It's as if establishing a sect doesn't need a stable economic system, consistent production of pills, weapons, artifacts, a constant increase in the library of martial arts, a strong user, more strong cultivators, a good background, high reputation built up, good organizing skills, land, powerful land, materials, competition, and an actual reason to join said sect just established.
So yes, of course, I am going to give my book a 5 stars. That is like a rule. ...Okay, so let me be clear. This book is not an sm*t book like my other book, it has a more serious plot. So of course, since I want character development as well, my mc will not be a perfect one. Remember, we have read tons of novels, he has not. So don't expect him to be very smart. However, he will have people supporting him from behind who will ensure that he doesn't make bad decisions, but you will have to wait for them to appear.... Warning: this is a revenge novel, so there will be lots of killing. Mc will even kill innocents without a shred of mercy. There will be gore.So read if you are comfortable with that stuff. Thank you~~...Now with that done, I welcome you for the ride~~