two main problems.First is the level of writing quality. English doesn't seems to be his native langue and even for me an french with a not that good level of English grammar, it sting my eyes...The second one is the chaotic amount of techniques. He have so much bloodlines, cultivations techniques, talents at the same time. When you mix both it's very difficult to understand and follow the story.
I was able to read the chapters temporarily for free so i have no idea about update stability.MC is basically described as sculpted from marble by the gods as the most beautiful man in the world from chapter 1.The novel is all over the place. It starts off with a power system based on understanding runes. The MC immediately gains a system that lets him convert any english word into a perfectly understood max leveled. People spend their whole lives randomly guessing their way at runes. He then thinks of about 9 words that would make him OP. He discovers Time and Fate are actually higher level than the highest possible level, and several orthers that grant him control over most elements jacked and really smart. He pretty much stops trying to improve after that. The system tells him is about rank 2 out of 9 and at any point he is able to reach rank 9 with no more effort than to think of a word. Spiritual power increases directly in relation to how many runes you have knowledge of and how well you understand what the rune means. His main goal in the story is to become strong as possible to protect his family, but he is an orphan whose family was killed before he transmigrated. He then goes to the most famous school in the world to learn how to properly use runes. Which seems like it would be about combinining individual runes into sentences to increase their power. Which is displayed by the first person MC doesnt insta kill. What actually happens is he shows up and runes are no longer relevant. His system is no longer about runes its about upgrading his pets with exp and suddenly gives quests. He decides to graduate in a month and doesnt learn a single thing about runes. The story cant keep names, ages, amounts, power levels or just about anything consistent. There will be contridictions pretty much every other chapter. Good luck
I started reading this two days before this review and let me tell you, ive binged all 288 chapters currently released. This novel is so far my favorite Novel on this entire platform. The brilliance of the Background, character development, and overall the writing in general, speaks leaps and bounds of wgat separates this masterpiece from the abundance of writing on this site. There are no info dumps and the characters pasts as well as the worlds past, come gradually and are expertly implemented inti the story in an ebtertaining and shockingly perfect way. Also may i commend the author for writing the mc so well. You by far made the correct choice in making the mc so edgy, it solidifies the uniqueness and masterful complexity of the novel. The plot twists constantly keep me on the edge of my seat and reading for hours. The chapter length is perfectly sized to not be too long nor too short, but right in the sweet spot. I am personally very excited to see what you will do with Hanah’s charcter. I could go on and on about how perfect this novel is but i will never explain it good enough to do it justice, just know that you should read this. You will not regret reading this absolute masterpiece, but keep in mind it takes time for the development of everything, but you will see how that only makes it even more perfect.
Did they seriously just spell humanoid wrong? Dearest friend, with a spelling mistake in the title, I have no trust in your ability to check for errors along the way.
So far i enjoy this but does anyone know the RAW name? 荒野探秘：神级扮演，开局麒麟纹身 does not seem to be the right one
haven't read at all but read the synopsis but didn't wanna leave a low review just for my question but here's my question:why would having a special forces system let you write poems? I don't see how special forces = poems
I gave this one a chance and read the raws as it was quite entertaining at the start but that is also the best part about it. This novel is just frustrating as disasters to the family keep on happening. Dumb decisions and no character development made me drop this novel.
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There are enemies around every corner, ancient demons and old immortals trying to devour the baby as nourishment but what do they do, just taking walks around the wilderness, foreign cities and even going to secret realms. Why would u take a 6 month year old baby to an ancient secret realm??? Also he starts talking like a grown up after 6 months, scolding his father and other family members(haha my son is such a genius haha, its normal for him to curse me)
150 chapters in and the baby is still just a one year old, so no character growth. He sneaked out so he can go to a secret realm in the north where all other forces are at. For what? To compete with others for resources.
He has a system and is a prodigy himself that advances almost every other day, so why cant he just stay at home for a few years and train there instead of courting disaster everywhere he goes
A very good story. The author already has a very successful novel so it is not surprising that even this one is so promising. A great read with a great mc and a very interesting plot. I highly recommend it [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
more update pls
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Its not good or bad, just dull and boring
Particularly the mc who constantly makes excuses for being passive and pathetic
The mc pretends he is avoiding trouble but he is just a coward (the irony being that he looks for trouble)
The similarity to japanese wimp mcs is unpleasant
I think this is a good story, it just isn't hitting a spot for me personally. I think from what I have read so far the story is an enjoyable read and is going to build up to some really good things but at the moment this story isn't really hooking me in enough to read everyday. I think that the writing quality is good the characters are good and premise is good I just think that you should wait until chapter 50-80 to come to a definitive conclusion if you like the book or not. reading the Author's other's work I have a strong feeling this story is going to be really good.
The story is good so far! I like how you vividly narrated the story and the development was nice and steady. I love the plotline and it was an enjoyable read! Keep it going until you reach a million views and you will find it pleasing to the eyes. Characters are showed well with various emotions and I can't help but be attached to them. Kudos and your reader here. Peace ✌️