This is waste of you time.
Don't read this Novel....too much nonsense.
Mc is kinda useless. this Novel drag too much........................
I don’t know where the author disappeared to but this was quite interesting. Definitely recommend............................................
This story has a great premise! This book for real broke all expectations I had for it. Keep up the good work and this story will go places. 10/10 for sure!
Not good at all.
So far so good sounds like a pokemon kind of thing with death beingnpossible. Character develpment seems good as there is deciept as well and Several learning opportunities...oh past 140
Its not bad, i think theres better ones that deserves to be picked more, so dont pick this one webnovel the comic is better anyway 140 140 140
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Hi there! Thank you for even making it this far! This is my attempt at a holistic breakdown of this work, but please keep in mind that it is my first time writing a story of this genre.
TLDR: Not a typical OP ML who levels up in a game. More of the journey (both mental and in-game) of a top eSports player. Inspired by actual eSports players and discusses their struggles, games, and career.
Writing Quality: Clear and understandable writing with minimal grammatical errors. Generally reread and edited at least twice before publishing. I personally pride myself on vivid descriptions of scenery and emotion and try to add small Easter eggs or foreshadowing, but it might read a bit wordier than most works of this genre.
Stability of Updates: Pushing for an update at least once every two days. I am a current student, so please excuse me if I disappear for a few days. That being said, if you vote and comment, chances of me updating or even giving a mass release are very high :3
Story Development: Will be a moderately paced story, roughly divided into four quarters that mirror the ML's place in life: 1. Casual Play 2. Rise of eSports 3. Height of eSports Career 4. Forced towards Retirement/New Commercialization Trends *A lot of the plot drivers will be personal growth, both career-wise and interpersonal relationship-wise, so do not head into this story expecting a straight leveling up story.*
Character Design: Very realistic character designs, with each person complete with their own strengths and flaws. More importantly, there will be character growth and development.
World Background: Realistic setting that mirrors the history of eSports. The game, Kings of Valor, is loosely based on popular MOBAs such as League of Legends, except with different names, champions, and champion skills. (And yes I play League a lot ;-; Tbh wayyy more than I should for my own good)
Warnings: Not the typical videogame story that focused on the game itself or the somehow OP ML but instead centers around character development, gamers' relationships to family and friends, societal expectations, and choosing between dreams and reality.
Disclaimer: All coincidences with real life names and events are not intentional and are not intended to offend anyone.
Enjoy! To see if people actually read through these reviews...if you play League, attach a GIF of your main! Also, if you wanna support me through Ko-Fi for the new Diana Ultimate skin, I swear I'll update ;-;
The story is well written and well paced with an amazing main character. The author is really good at conveying characters emotions in the more action heavy and tension driven scenes.
I have read a lot of novels with bad grammar, but not once in my life have I ever seen a novel with this bad of grammar. I mean, everyone paragraph has multiple grammatical errors that makes it hard to understand. The plot for this novel is, in my opinion, very good, it also has a ton of potential, but not under this current author. I understand that the author is probably new to writing novels, but at least try to appear as though you actually cared about the quality of your novel. The characters are ok at best, but most of the time they are just not interesting, they don't feel unique. The main character is kind of funny at some times, but that's the best I can say for the MC. The only pro to this story is that he regularly updates it. Overall this novel is pretty bad, not because of the plot, but because of the author. Alright alright, I'm done ranting, but it's kind of frustrating when you see a novel that has so much potential but is then ruined by the actual writing of the story. So to conclude this rant, I would say read this only if you don't care about grammatical errors and if you don't care about most of the characters being, well, 'normal'.
If you're reading this review, then I guess you stumbled upon this novel by chance. Let me tell you one thing, fellow daoists: you will definitely regret not reading this novel! Even if you are not used to reading this particular genre, you'll still be immersed in the story because of the author's impeccable writing style.
Good story! Though I don't like this genre, I will look forward to it. The writting skill is amazing so I could learn something from your book. Keep up with you great thought!