I like the idea and I like how he is growing stronger and stronger. Didn't like how it the story went till chapter 20 but it got better afterwards. Now I have read all 40 chapters and hope it gets picked. It's better then all the other novels in trail at the moment.
after 26 chapters and giving this book enough chance i conclude this is a chinese trash book . not worth spending ur stones to unclock .........
Why Is The Translation quality of this novel so bad?
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Hands down the best novel this batch, it's more original and entertaining to read than others, if you like horror then this will be a great way to pass the time.
I had only read up to pair games (almost 20 chapters). The reason is simple.
1. Grammar sucks. Author either is at A2 level of english or just uses GTranslate. Possibly both. No, it's more like he is B1 for a paragraph and then, the next paragraph is straight out of MTL.
2. Trans. This is just my personal preference, but I am not really into *Spoiler*
40-old man leaning on our young mc, falling in love with him, turning girl outside games, falling in love even more, and turning into 40-year old man in-game. Those conversations of:" Would you marry me if I turned back to man?" Made me sick. Again, this is not sickening to anyone (obv, since author seems to have such fetish), but to me, it is. Whoever reads this, be careful, cuz they may even kiss in the near future in their male forms. *Spoiler*
Outside of that, the idea was good. Actually good. No wonder it won the prize. Author, if you wish to actually make it big, please just don't do sick things and find a proper editor or use a software, I recommend grammarly.
Hey guys, shameless author here.
What to expect before reading this novel:
1. it will be a mix of dark and light theme. I'm hoping to focus a bit on the light theme aspect than the dark theme aspect.
2. It wont be generic and only a handful of tropes will be implemented.
3. Its a non-human mc. So, humans won't be the main focus.
4. The mc's original world(earth) is a parallel world of earth. Historical and mythological themes will be implemented. So, if i get certain facts wrong, tell me.
5. I would yall to not be shy and leave your thoughts in the section below.
6. PLEASE VOTE!! I NEED IT
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Vampire girl > Human girl
Vamire girl = Good succ
Vampire loli = Not underaged
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Honestly, the story is good. Though there are 7 chapters so far, the author dives really deep into the main character and tries to make him relatable.
The writing quality is fairly good with a few structural mistakes here and there. (rather than structural mistakes it's more like the author could've used a better choice of words) still, I shall give him 5 stars.
Also because the story is relatively short (7 chaps) I am willing to believe in the author and give him 5 stars. It's looking promising so far, and because of the small amounts of chap, I can't really give it anything less than 5 as character dev, world-building doesn't just get built in a few chapters.
The only thing that prevents me from giving this a full 5 stars is the stability of updates which is like once a week.
I can only give it 4 stars as of now.
Keep up the good work
It's a really good story that follows the idea of jumping back in time. Even though it's a common novel idea, the author still manages to draw you into the world. The itemization and quests along with the fame system are well balanced and believable. The writing of the environment also paints a grand picture of the game in your mind.
The only thing I would note is that it has a slow start to the story, taking around seven chapters before you even get into the time jump. So if you can stick around for that then you're in for a good ride!
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Not bad, I'm still seeing where this will go, and also update faster.....................
I really like how this man (I presume it is a man as this is a history/kingdom building novel) has written this novel of 'his'. I'd highly recommend it and I praise it every sunrise as I sacrifice a lamb towards the sun god ?? 9.5/10 I'd say, not apocalypse worthy but it can get there with a little more time and sweat ??