A COMPLETE COPY OF After 300 Years Of Immortal Cultivation, I Suddenly Discovered That It Was A Martial Arts World.............................................................
Going from the excess of bad reviews, I respect the author for not deleting any negative criticism even if it is from people who obviously haven’ gone outside the majority of their life. This review isn’t representative of the quality of the novel but the ability of the author to not respond harshly to negative feedback. Keep that in mind after you read this and write a review.
Woah! Woah! Woah! Bishop's nemesis you're at it again! Another master piece?A wonderful and interesting start, it's good and incredible. Am awaiting your updates lol!
Its very intresting, I only regreat that, I found this book do late.
my only disappointment with this novel is the fact that its released so slowly. Borderline torture and agony cuz the novel is glorious. amazing world, lore, character design...i just wish this book gains more recognition cuz its seriously one of the best ones here....and I'm very stingy with where I spend my coins.
it can be a bit clunky at times with weird story development and things that literally come out of nowhere but it is a pretty good story and worth reading.
Just finished up reading these 30 chapters and I love it. I need more please don't drop it. Keep up the good work.............................
(I will start with the positive critics before the negative ones.
I only bother reviewing things that I actually like. This usually takes 50+ chapters. I am reviewing this after 3. The quality of the writing and character voice is significantly higher than anything else I have read here and it needed to be acknowledged. I will continue to update as I read more, but have no doubt it will continue to be excellent.
Copy and pasted my original review sue me
It's a very well written story so far. The writing quality is excellent for someone who's first language isn't English.
The stability of updates seem to be good from the dates posted on the chapters, only time will tell though.
The story development so far is interesting, definitely very catching as your first read it simply because the character seems more down to earth and isn't straight up gung-ho as other stories of this nature seem to be when things first starts. Hopefully the character will adapt to the world yet still retain his core values from earth and possibly even try to integrate these values into the world over time, instead of just saying **** it and giving in to the regular values of the cultivation world and simply abandoning the values of a modern day earth.
The character design could use some more in depth personality description and history, such as flashbacks to memories that help to shape him to be the person he is and show much more accurately why he makes decisions the way he does.
The world background is pretty much ok,but it presents the opportunity for much more complex world building as the story progresses as the character himself knows very little of the world he is so far.
Overall, the story is well written, has seemingly stable updates; quality story development; character design that,while could use some improvement , is presently pretty good,and world background that has enough room for it to be developed and designed so as to be complex and very interesting.
Hopefully, the author takes a route where the character would try to integrate modern earth values through perhaps a seemingly quirky yet solid character that strives to, while not being a bleeding heart hero like superman or all might, improve the world in a realistic yet simple thought process, such as the 'pay it forward' philosophy where one kind act can repaid by paying it forward to another unfortunate individual as well as implementing a modern day earth practices such as basic education institutions like primary schools, secondary schools, tertiary schools and universities in a effort to unite people under a single banner rather than fractured into different clans and sects that hoard knowledge like a miser hoards money. Just a thought, otherwise do you author and let the haters go **** themselves.
****,,,this is garbage, [I dont like rape],,,,,,,,,,its exactly like the tags,,,,be warned.....writer goes through with what he promises,, the MC is a rapist
The chps are long, the writing quality is decent, and SD is okay......, just gave 1 star to CD cause MC is trash, like dude is a rapist, yes I am bias, but to be fair, I just feel sad for the lost potential cause of the rapy MC,,,I mean dude is raizel from nobelesse.....would've been a dope SI.
**: if yah write about a not rapy MC, maybe a proper villain [not nut like joker but villian like....Mr.cold or someone with purpose or something], or a proper SI FF, rather than a perverted MC...do tell me...anyway GL author
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It's good and the rest of this review is all spam.
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