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I love the story so far and I'm all cought up, but i need more
The story has a lot of grammatical issues. There was some sentences that could have been worded differently for a better story flow. A few words were misspelled, and transitioning to the next scene is kind of hard to followed. But, every authors is bound to have a lot to a few writing issues. No one is spare! I have never seen an author with a grammar-free story before. With that said, my honest thought is....I'm a big mythology lover! love, love, love it! This story is right up my ally! I like how the author indicated which gods or goddesses is which, and power. But in the long-run it might be harder to remember which god and power they are.The author could make a page, listing them all or remind the reader at the end of each chapters ( this might be a bit much).
Another thing is the characters. They were appearing one by one, but for those that were introduce at the beginning beside the gods, it was a bit hard to follow. I would think, for me, is that the pacing was a bit too fast. Especially, the emotional distress that Sol had when he was desperately searching for Anya. A short description about their relationship would be great in supporting his action. I feel like there's more it than just a simple teacher and student relationship. There were a few plot hole that I found to be inconsistent, but the story is still in development , so scratch that. Maybe, there's a plot twist that the author is planning on later.
In overall, even thought there are grammatical issues. That could be fix, so there's no need to worry. Beside that the author is doing great! Keep up the good work!
You know you win my attention just to the mention of soldiers! I love stories that had military trama, and yours picked my interest, since the beginning!
I like how did you develop the story, is kinda interesting, how did he end in his situation, and he didn't even know about it, and I won't's say more for the spoiler, hope to read more! I really enjoy it!
Keep going my friend, being an author is a telling journey! good luck to us! lol
Your story is great! I love how you cliffhang. It made me want to wait for another chapter. Nice characters specially Yuuki and i love how unique your writing style.
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well it has update stability. the rest of the novel is garbage it jumps around alot and it seems the othe has no idea how to make a story line at all
That Luo Weiwei is unnecessary??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
At the start, I felt like there is a mentor kind of relationship with Hades and la puppeteer! If you could pull it off, this would be epic! Although there are few grammatical writings from here and there, one sweep of editting will make the entire novel at its finest! Kudos for the author!
Hasn’t this already come out called the perfect accident or something like that why is it coming out again it’s literally a one onto one of the other one
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Let start by saying I dinged the author on updating stability since its been a while since we have had any updates (between chp 292-293I suspect the author went on vacation but didn’t leave a note. That being said, this book is great. The character building is top notch. The fact that the MC has multiple personalities who talk to each other makes their arguments hilarious . Plus its used as a plot point to explain that while the MC is OP, he cant use all his power at the same time because his personalities are the ones that know how to use a particular power so his personality switches depending on the situation. Its like have 4 very different MCs in one. One is super shy yet blood thirsty to the point where he terrifies the others, one is cold and analytical , another is a flirt and con artist always looking for that next score or scam and then we have our normal hero. The world building is cool. I love his mysterious master who’s a pervert that basically tortures him in the name of training. The biggest plus of this novel is the character development. You truly get a feel for what motivates the MC and all his companions. There is no harem(Thank God) although girls like him. I highly recommend this book. I have been trying to motivate the author by spending coins and voting for the book. Hopefully my dastardly plan works.