I a poor little Fanfic Author has never appeared here yet I give 5/5 main reason it's all about the memes and laughs that I get when I read this.
The story has potential. I personally have never read anything with a similar setting so I find it fresh. The writing quality needs some work but as the author is new and doesn't seem to have much experience that is to be expected. I would encourage readers to look past the grammatical errors and read the story without a critical mindset.
mediocre, very cliché .... without tension the opponents are very bland and are also always weaker than the main character.......................................................................
I just want to tell the author that PLEASE SPACE THE BIG PARAGRAPHS THEY ARE HEADACHE INDUCING AND ARE HARD TO READ.Also, I just saw the first couple of chapters
Recommended!!!!! Recommended!!!!! Recommended!!!!! Recommended!!!!! Recommended!!!!! Recommended!!!!! Recommended!!!!! Recommended!!!!! Recommended!!!!! Recommended!!!!!
Patient and smart mc. The goldenfinger is not too overpowering. It is rara to see such a complete book. A breath of fresh air within the eastern novels.
Few chapters yet i am hooked in this story already! The ancient times value the strength of the man but this story is different. I will follow the adventure of the two swordswomen.