unique type of system, i feel bad author stop writing this masterpiece.
pls release volume 2 plsssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss sssssss
Omg, when i started shivering due to excitement over what’s going to happen next could not stop reading, need more from this great author!!!
I randomly came across this book to get a change of my normal reading pace. So far it is a very good read and I look forward to continuing to follow along on the journey!
Very good plotline, and nicely written! Thinking of reading other projects of the author. Come on folk, what are you waiting for, go and read it.
Pretty good so far. The main character could definitely be considered evil, but the idea is pretty unique and I would definitely wish to see this novel continued. Maybe he will reform the Dragon Race into a more communal race rather than just a group of individuals. Can’t wait for more. THX.
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The story... What should I say... After the first chapter I was already tempted to drop it but I persisted through all 40 free chapters.My short review would be: the first 15 or so chapters (except for the first ~2) had the ability to make me laugh because of some nice side characters that got me some comical relief. Sadly when the mc moves towards his next target he leaves them behind (like I said: side characters). ⭐????The story is about an OP military male that comes out of prison after a mission and sees his family in peril. Now he's out for revenge. It's the cliche face slapping. He goes around seeking revenge on family after family. Those "esteemed" families feel offended by his actions and his brute force, things escalate and the family gets eradicated. Many things also involve his adopted sister but surprise surprise they are actually in love.You should not that the genre of this novel is magical realism. In general everything seems "normal" but the MC and his strongest subordinates (of course generals from the military) have some cultivation kind of martial arts skills. (MC can crush people with his aura if he for once doesn't decide to beat them up himself.)Character design and development... There isn't any of it really. Mc seems shallow and nowhere like a military person should seem. He has anger and control issues and seems very superficial. There isn't much information about the world background, just that the MC is the almighty and every military person looks up to him etc. There are also loopholes in general that aren't really explained (yet). Like he was framed by his business partner that landed him in prison for 5 years and then a strong guy picked him up and like this he somehow got into the military where he now has unimaginable high achievements etc but at the same time it was said he went to military for a top secret reason and nobody knew about this or that he was in the military before jail time.If you're searching for a short break from your current novels but don't want to start a complete new one that you have to finish eventually because it's too good, the first few chapters of this novel might be just right (if you like cliche face slapping and can bare with not so deep characters). You definitely won't get attached. If you want something worth your coins... Better not.I think it's kinda sad because the general plot could be a pretty good face slapping novel if done perfectly. Sadly the author lacks the ability.
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Not anything crazy but a decent story coupled with a good translation. A light and fun read.
There are only a few chapters, but besides a few minor mistakes in the plot that could easily be the result of forgetting what was written in a previous chapter, it can be seen that the writing quality and plot are well formed. The MC is a little dumb, but its on purpose in this one. Read the book if you want to know more!!