AsDarkAsBlackKD
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The name of the story is really catchy. Your writing quality is good too. But the only problem I found is the synopsis. Don't you think it's too short? Maybe a little bit more information would attract more and more readers. Good luck!
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As the synopsis says, don't expect any sort of tension, hardship or anything else that may even vaguely elicit an emotional response from you. You can read this entire story from start to end without feeling a single shred of emotion. Is this a new guiness world record? Probably...
I love it but the max chapters is so I can't enjoy it till he's lvl 1000 and doesn't listen to the gods so plz write more it's in my top 3 most favourite novels
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It's good and all, especially the early chapters but once you hit when he returns it's just so bad, like it's fine but I just hate how they make the whole love interest thing. I don't get why he needs this love interest so much. Can't the man just be alone bruh. Like I get that you want to add a female lead and all but you don't got to, that was the appeal of this whole novel to me. Is that this crazy dude goes on a eternal rampage unable to connect to the world due to being well a walking disaster. Anyways I've dropped it for now at least, might pick it up again and if I do I might change my review but I'm just leaving it like this.
Interesting story.
First off, I'd like to say that I like all the large paragrpahs you have. Never a detail missed. There are a lot of competing ideas, and as a writer who loves mixing different medias into his books, I really enjoyed that part.
Good job so far!
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
The story looks interesting and has potential for the future. If the author keeps updating constantly, I can see this book going far.
Other than that, I have issues with the length of chapters. I hope the author can fix that and make the chapters longer.
Other than than, this is a nice book I highly recommended to read.
Hi, I really like this book. Would you be interested in putting it on Mega Novel too? If you ever have the intention, just message or contact me through email: charlotte @meganovel.com
So far good
Just no.You'll lose a lot of brain cells reading this
