AsDarkAsBlackKD
First off, I will say that the writing quality of this story is great. They do a lot of things right, and the story has many enjoyable parts. I find myself smiling quite a bit at sections of the story. That said, there are two glaring issues with this story that need to be addressed. First off, the reincarnation aspect of this story is basically pointless. The main character is a human who was born into the body of a dragon, so you'd think there'd be some difference between him and other dragons right? Nope. This MC no different from the others. Thinking like a dragon, acting like one, and is essentially dominated by his dragon instincts like 90% of the time. If you wondering if his human side is ever going to matter, you can safely put those thoughts to rest. He is a sociopath who lovingly plays with his family and then slaughters hundreds of humans with a smile on his face while complaining that it was too easy like all the others. He brings nothing new.In addition to this, it seems like the dragons in this story suffer from brain damage. They preach about keeping balance and how humans are using mana wrong. But they never try to explain anything to them. The dragons constantly complain about this problem as well, but they're causing the very issue they're trying to stop. The dragons also set up a training ground for young dragons to kill humans, but if humans ever win, they get butthurt and go destroy cities completely unrelated to the deaths and say: "Yeah! That's what you deserve!"What's worse is that these dragons think of themselves as wise and intelligent beings. And for the most part, they are. They even go out of their way to collect EXTENSIVE knowledge on specific human kingdoms. Yet somehow they can't grasp these very simple pieces of common sense.
Superbe histoire et bon développement vivement la suite
It's definitely a comedy I'll give it that. Lots of trope jokes, kudos.
It's enjoyable as a parody. Maybe have something to drink before reading though. Don't take it so seriously. Yeah the MC is a***wful and but this is not a compelling epic or anything- it's funny when you read too many serious attempts at this genre.
My only major complaint then, are the walls of text. It's just a headache to read through.
Just a simple review
Writing quality - 5
Stability of updating - 5
Story development - 5
Character design - 5
World background - 5
This story is different from all the novels i've read.Mc is calm,lazy,smart and antagonist,different from your usual dumb mc.For now he has only one goal which is to find out about his own existence.
This is a story that you guys won't regret reading.
Beta male trash trash trash trash trash trash trasG trash trash trash trash
After reading synopsis (I repeat after ONLY reading synopsis) the only thing that I wish to expect from this novel is that MC dose NOT return to being human again.
Seriously, wild life is way more straightforward, honest and (if comparing from human's) relaxing.
I know I am being selfish and does not flow logic or whatever, but that is my sincere wish.
i think it was nice novel worth reading.i hope you can keep writting in future.would be nicer if you show or explain how pathfinder system works
Honestly i was excited at first with him using runes but as other people have said it has turned into a beast taming novel where he doesnt even use his runes and has his beasts do everything, seriously what the actual ****. ill still read it though because im interested in the beast taming novels but god **** should have just started with that
It's quite interesting, unique story line, reading Sci-Fic for the first time, not bad... This is one of the good book to read. Keep writing. Well done!
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i enjoy the flow of the novel and the route the storyline takes. the character's development is something so important in a novel and you've executed that so well and I really admire the writing style as well.
generic brainless crap written by 14yo.
Do not waste ur time on this shit.
So badddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd.
