A Dose of Happiness

I'm in love with the introduction, and the storyline is amazing.
I enjoyed learning about the character and his good and bad traits, knowing about the whole medical condition and what type of person he can be.
I haven't heard much from other characters or very little is said about them and that leaves me wondering about the possibilities, as in who is he always with? who does he prioritize? stuff like that so I'll be waiting for moreeeee, as I feel that as the story progresses more will be said.

I would continue reading this book so please do keep writing!
the background was the best part for me, I enjoyed reading about the places the character was in, it felt so real (pure talent)...
The background is quite interesting as in the prologue it leaves me wondering and guessing about what will happen in the end. I hope the character makes it.

I will start of by saying, you're doing great writing a story and it's not an easy job. You have succeeded in doing it. Congratulations !!

The quality of wiritng is good and had good scope to become an even better writer in the future.

The story development in each chapter is slow but very informative and very needed to get the insight of the story, hence I loved it !! Causing impatience means readers are eager to know more about this story.

The character designing is coming up well, interestingly and sort of makes a reader keep reading further to know more, but getting to the point was a bit dragged that in between some paragraphs I found myself skimming through to know what it is. But worth it, the mysterious feeling which makes me wanna know more unable to stop, it already a success .

Updating I have to say a but slow since it's only updated twice in a week, I wonder if people would see the novel and reme to read it if it lies unnoticed. Maybe that could be improved.

The world background. Am applauding.  It's perfect and simply marvellous. You have a wonderful insight about things you are wiritng and it gets to the reader well. With the descriptions I could see everything in my head as i read.

Congratulations, you're a writer with a future. Keep going and try updating regularly.  Fighting !

This is a gem in the 'rent-a-friend' genre that brings a smile to your face with a clever set up and loveable characters.

The general writing quality is extremely high, and personally I enjoyed the style quite a bit, barring some space for polishing.

Time is spent in the early chapters building up the character of Leo, though some of the scenes chosen for character building might feel a little inconseuquential, which the author understandably has to walk a fine line between slice of life stories and log of everything that happens to one's day.

Speaking which, the pacing does remind me of the pacing of the first fate visual novel, where we start the story with one character then cut the perspective away and follow another for the next few chapters until they meet again.

Keep at it!

The premise is well thought of and the characters emotions are portrayed in a genuine way.

Aside from some minor grammatical errors, this is a gem in the making.

Well done and write on.

Hi! I love how you write your story. Keep it up! Thank you for making this story!

A long awaited story laced with an intriguing idea!

If you're a sucker for tragedy romance or slice of life and romcoms, then this is for you.

There's a balance between the sad scenes and the comedy scenes that enables readers to grow hooked on the series.